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| Dr Strum |
 Jun 18 2006, 08:00 PM
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| Dr Strum |
Jun 18 2006, 10:02 PM
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Can Lead the Nation with a Microphone Group: Angels Posts: 5427 Joined: 23-December 05 From: Seattle Member No.: 1 |
Awesome!! You don't suck, you just need a little work but all in all, it was pretty damn cool. But one question, why Ledah?
Do I detect a hint of yaoi romance :> ? ~~~ Писатель всегда будет в оппозиции к политике, пока сама политика будет в оппозиции к культуре.
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| Dr Strum |
Jun 19 2006, 09:17 AM
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Can Lead the Nation with a Microphone Group: Angels Posts: 5427 Joined: 23-December 05 From: Seattle Member No.: 1 |
Whoa whoa, hold on. Where did it say that Lina was Fia's sister? O_o; Coco hinted that they were related somehow, but she never exactly said what it was. Anyway, other than that, the idea itself was great. The fighting scenes are probably one of the hardest to write about since it happens so fast which was where you struggled a bit.
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| Dr Strum |
Jun 19 2006, 01:15 PM
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Can Lead the Nation with a Microphone Group: Angels Posts: 5427 Joined: 23-December 05 From: Seattle Member No.: 1 |
They're not related.
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| Dr Strum |
Jun 19 2006, 04:04 PM
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Can Lead the Nation with a Microphone Group: Angels Posts: 5427 Joined: 23-December 05 From: Seattle Member No.: 1 |
Well I say they are so :P!
I picked Ledah, cause I'm a Ledah superfanboy! Duh :) I just wanted to finish so I spen through the fight scene ~~~ Писатель всегда будет в оппозиции к политике, пока сама политика будет в оппозиции к культуре.
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