LACRIMA PEONS ARTZ, Draw? Post it! Options

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Archeia: Those are so pretty! Your lines are so nice! What program do you use?

Making some sort of lazy attempt at being semi-active at LCN again.

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Pencil + Scanner + Photoshop CS2 lazy coloring job. I had fun.

She's supposed to look sleepy but she looks kinda stoned instead. Let's ignore that and pretend she's sleepy looking, m'kay.

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She looks stoned.


It's pretty nice for a lazy coloring job.

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Her eyes, her face, and her nose are facing in different directions.

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I love her hair and the ribbon.

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@Liger I use open canvas.

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This post has been edited by Archeia: Sep 20 2008, 08:15 AM

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The distance between the nose and the eyes is uneven.

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RIVIERA CHRISTMAS TREE AGAIN.



I hate how I draw faces. HER EYES ARE SUPPOSED TO BE CLOSED, NOT FULL OF MAKEUP.
I messed up on the bottom. That's supposed to be a stand, since it's a tree.
That's tinsel wrapped around her.
Her hands are supposed to be held together in prayer. I think the tinsel messed it up.
That's ArchAngel on her head. It's horrible because I couldn't remember the details and screwed up.
Her shoulders are messed up. At one point they looked more like shoulder guards.

Someone please redraw the face. I can't stand it. At first they wre just slanted slits, but then I decided that looked too racial and tried to do something else and screwed up completely.

This post has been edited by Raijinili: Oct 7 2008, 03:15 AM

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LIKE THIS RAI?

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And something not related:

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I drew her a bit slanted on the paper...

This post has been edited by chrishawke: Oct 7 2008, 11:57 PM

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Oh that's how you draw closed eyes

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Chris asked for criticism.

The insides of the shoulders, the armpits, shouldn't be puffy.
The puffy shoulders should fold onto her arm, so there should be concave-down arcs where the puffyness ends.
Her eyes seem too small and wide somehow.
Her neck shouldn't be so long if she's looking down.
The tinsel wrapping around her doesn't make sense, since it's too straight (should curve down from the gravity in between anchor points).
Tinsel doesn't have circles.
Archangel is too small. She should be proportional to Fia as a regular angel is to a regular tree. It should probably take up a third of her head.
The tinsel end at the top should probably droop down to show that it's ending.
Her ring finger on the right hand looks a little too thick on the knuckle.

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WHY DID NOBODY TELL ME THIS
ZOOMING IN IS LIKE EASY MODE

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Sorry 'bout this n00b question:

How do you put in the "Click to show spoiler" thing?

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CODE

[spoiler]Neon is a noob.[/spoiler]

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You're a dick.

That's not even funny. What'd I ever do to you?

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Neon is easily butthurt and takes everything seriously.

This post has been edited by P.P.A.: Oct 20 2008, 04:15 PM