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| Dr Strum |
 Jun 7 2008, 11:18 PM
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Yeah, why does Fia have these weird things on the front? It looks impossible to put on.
Her ears should be more visible. The other three look too sexualized. ~~~ Писатель всегда будет в оппозиции к политике, пока сама политика будет в оппозиции к культуре.
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| Dr Strum |
 Jun 8 2008, 03:00 AM
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Can Lead the Nation with a Microphone Group: Angels Posts: 5427 Joined: 23-December 05 From: Seattle Member No.: 1 |
Still can't wait for it. How's the ein and ledah character design going?
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Jun 8 2008, 06:06 AM
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Can Lead the Nation with a Microphone Group: Angels Posts: 5427 Joined: 23-December 05 From: Seattle Member No.: 1 |
Wow impressive redesigns indeed o_o
I like them all really. And on the topic of H-scenes you may need to be more specific. After all a H-scene doesn't 100% of the time mean sex. Could just be nudity. *Shrug* ~~~ Писатель всегда будет в оппозиции к политике, пока сама политика будет в оппозиции к культуре.
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| Dr Strum |
Jun 8 2008, 07:17 AM
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Can Lead the Nation with a Microphone Group: Angels Posts: 5427 Joined: 23-December 05 From: Seattle Member No.: 1 |
ORZ
I..didn't know this thing could make me stressed out... If only I have better artistic skill this wouldn't bother me too much... Problem is I'm not the one drawing and she's doing this on her own good will so it's really painful for me to ask her to redesign Fia seeing I kinda like the design, I asked her to change the ribbons back to normal so yeah I hope that'll solve the things. I'm not sure about the sexualized stuff seeing that's her art style? This post has been edited by Archeia: Jun 8 2008, 07:18 AM ~~~ Писатель всегда будет в оппозиции к политике, пока сама политика будет в оппозиции к культуре.
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| Dr Strum |
Jun 8 2008, 07:51 AM
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Can Lead the Nation with a Microphone Group: Angels Posts: 5427 Joined: 23-December 05 From: Seattle Member No.: 1 |
I love your friend's art style
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Jun 8 2008, 12:09 PM
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Can Lead the Nation with a Microphone Group: Angels Posts: 5427 Joined: 23-December 05 From: Seattle Member No.: 1 |
 W-well, thank goodness it's ok for Aya to make some changes to the redesigns, so aside from changing Fia's ribbons and reducing the number of belts of her design do you guys have any suggestions for the other characters? This way we won't have to redesign over and over again ;_; *sulks in corner* ~~~ Писатель всегда будет в оппозиции к политике, пока сама политика будет в оппозиции к культуре.
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| Dr Strum |
Jun 8 2008, 02:49 PM
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Can Lead the Nation with a Microphone Group: Angels Posts: 5427 Joined: 23-December 05 From: Seattle Member No.: 1 |
Cierra, Rose and Meute look especially hot. <3
And yes I agree that these things around Fia's ear look weird. ~~~ Писатель всегда будет в оппозиции к политике, пока сама политика будет в оппозиции к культуре.
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Jun 8 2008, 06:27 PM
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Can Lead the Nation with a Microphone Group: Angels Posts: 5427 Joined: 23-December 05 From: Seattle Member No.: 1 |
No particular complaints with the rest of them really.
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Jun 8 2008, 09:47 PM
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Can Lead the Nation with a Microphone Group: Angels Posts: 5427 Joined: 23-December 05 From: Seattle Member No.: 1 |
Seconded.
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Jun 9 2008, 02:07 AM
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Can Lead the Nation with a Microphone Group: Angels Posts: 5427 Joined: 23-December 05 From: Seattle Member No.: 1 |
Cierra looks REALLY sexy.
Keep it up, Archeia! ~~~ Писатель всегда будет в оппозиции к политике, пока сама политика будет в оппозиции к культуре.
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Jun 9 2008, 02:40 AM
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Can Lead the Nation with a Microphone Group: Angels Posts: 5427 Joined: 23-December 05 From: Seattle Member No.: 1 |
Aside from Fia's belts and ribbon, I don't like how her top thingy looks. The green part, I mean. It looks out of place. Like there's not enough green on her outfit for it to not look wrong, I guess. I don't know, maybe it will look better if there's one less belt near it, but right now it just looks strange to me.
Only one other problem. This one is with Serene, though. It's the white part of the end of her skirt. It looks... odd. Like it's just a sheet or something. It's probably because it's so separated from the blue part, but I don't know and I don't think it looks good. Everything else is fine. ~~~ Писатель всегда будет в оппозиции к политике, пока сама политика будет в оппозиции к культуре.
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| Dr Strum |
Jun 16 2008, 10:25 AM
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Can Lead the Nation with a Microphone Group: Angels Posts: 5427 Joined: 23-December 05 From: Seattle Member No.: 1 |
Hmm..when I look at the poll vote result,it seem that many people prefer playing as Ein and other character than Cierra,serene,lina and fia..And to much my suprise no one vote fia...yet.
Edit:oh crap forgot to check the vote carefully. This post has been edited by CATGUN: Jun 16 2008, 10:29 AM ~~~ Писатель всегда будет в оппозиции к политике, пока сама политика будет в оппозиции к культуре.
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| Dr Strum |
Jun 16 2008, 01:50 PM
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Can Lead the Nation with a Microphone Group: Angels Posts: 5427 Joined: 23-December 05 From: Seattle Member No.: 1 |
Well, I don't see Fia as the main character of a Sim Dating game.
I'll probably play as one of the new characters, since I don't really like Ein. ~~~ Писатель всегда будет в оппозиции к политике, пока сама политика будет в оппозиции к культуре.
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Jun 16 2008, 10:15 PM
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Can Lead the Nation with a Microphone Group: Angels Posts: 5427 Joined: 23-December 05 From: Seattle Member No.: 1 |
Well since this was bumped, might as well say the progress.
Almost done with the beginning's script, after that, the game :P Maybe I'll release a short demo sometime after aya finished the first few portraits :') This post has been edited by Archeia: Jun 16 2008, 10:15 PM ~~~ Писатель всегда будет в оппозиции к политике, пока сама политика будет в оппозиции к культуре.
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| Dr Strum |
Jun 18 2008, 02:51 PM
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Can Lead the Nation with a Microphone Group: Angels Posts: 5427 Joined: 23-December 05 From: Seattle Member No.: 1 |
QUOTE(Archeia @ Jun 1 2008, 11:26 PM)  Here's a reasonable update :d Cierra, Lina, Serene, Meute and Rose Redesigns :3 http://fc03.deviantart.com/fs27/f/2008/153...243ded083f6.jpg http://fc04.deviantart.com/fs26/f/2008/153...a82dc359c14.jpg http://fc06.deviantart.com/fs26/f/2008/153...7fe2c0b5ae1.jpg http://fc08.deviantart.com/fs29/f/2008/153...6b46c9a4a3b.jpg And my pathetic attempt to make a Title Screen http://img138.imageshack.us/img138/9607/ttlscreencopywl4.png I personally like the design on the Girls, and all that you do, also I can recommend you that revise your designs ad all, if something presents PM me ~~~ Писатель всегда будет в оппозиции к политике, пока сама политика будет в оппозиции к культуре.
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