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| FlameSpark |
 Jun 18 2006, 08:00 PM
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| Megafreak |
Jun 18 2006, 10:02 PM
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 Casual Chatter Group: Arcs Posts: 66 Joined: 1-December 06 From: In that little room for insane people.... Member No.: 308 |
Awesome!! You don't suck, you just need a little work but all in all, it was pretty damn cool. But one question, why Ledah?
Do I detect a hint of yaoi romance :> ? ~~~ What really happened.....
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| Marionette |
Jun 19 2006, 09:17 AM
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 The Comedy of Errors Group: Knights Posts: 615 Joined: 24-December 05 From: Puerto Rico Member No.: 11 |
Whoa whoa, hold on. Where did it say that Lina was Fia's sister? O_o; Coco hinted that they were related somehow, but she never exactly said what it was. Anyway, other than that, the idea itself was great. The fighting scenes are probably one of the hardest to write about since it happens so fast which was where you struggled a bit.
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| untouch |
Jun 19 2006, 01:15 PM
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 Lazy Group: Arcs Posts: 24 Joined: 27-December 05 Member No.: 23 |
They're not related.
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| DavidSchinkel |
Jun 19 2006, 04:04 PM
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 Shy Group: Arcs Posts: 42 Joined: 10-June 10 From: Gig Harbor, Washington Member No.: 2071 |
Well I say they are so :P!
I picked Ledah, cause I'm a Ledah superfanboy! Duh :) I just wanted to finish so I spen through the fight scene |
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