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| Deadelus |
 May 12 2006, 03:31 AM
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Well it is going to take sometime to finish it. Iam half way to finishing it.
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| Skie |
May 13 2006, 04:24 AM
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 Lazy Group: Arcs Posts: 12 Joined: 15-March 08 Member No.: 1708 |
Note:This is my first time writing a fiction story. And yes it is very random and very off topic on the Rivera story line.
Elinda’s Musician’s You think you know the story about the famous Grim Angel; Ein and but you probably do not know that he was also musician. Ein played the Trombone; since he was a kid always played and performed for a yearly ceremony. So this is was the intro explaining the intro and what you need to know,now with the story. Lina: Fiiaa! Fia chose to ignore Lina because she thought Lina was just trying to get attention. Lina: Fiiiiaaaa!!!! With lost of patience she finally answered her. Fia: yes? Lina: He is awake! Fia: He is! Ein: where…. am…. I? Lina: you’re at our house. Fia: I don’t think that is what he meant. Where at a town called Elinda, and it is the time of the yearly celebration……oh…. wait I forgot to ask your name. Ein: I’m Ein, so what is this celebration you are talking about? Fia: It is a celebration in which we celebrate the gods; there is a big party with music, food, and prayer. Lina: Were playing in the band, I play the flute and Fia plays the trombone. Ein: (The trombone why does that sound familiar?)Can I see your trombone please Fia? Fia: Sure I guess? <><><><><><><><><><><><><><><><><><><><>><><><><> Lina: Whoa that was amazing! He played perfectly! Fia: Yeah you’re right. How did you play so perfectly? Did you take any lessons? Ein: I’m not sure. (How come I can play the trombone but not remember anything else?) Lina: Maybe you should play in the band with Fia and me? Fia: I’m not sure; he could still not be feeling well. Ein: No I’m fine, besides it should be a lot of fun. <><><><><><><><><><><><><><><><><><><><><><><><> 1...2…1...2...3… Lina: get ready Fia! Fia: get ready Ein! Ein: don’t worry I’ll be fine. (Why can’t I remember a thing!?, hey wait a minute that is it!) Lina: Psst, Fia why did Ein leave like that. Fia: don’t know, but it is probably something important. The End. Again I will say it again, yes I don’t say this often but it is true I suck at writingand it is my first time to. Please don’t write any hateful comments. ~~~  |
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| paperweight |
May 13 2006, 04:31 AM
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 Shy Group: Arcs Posts: 38 Joined: 15-August 06 Member No.: 192 |
What's Elinda? Some kind of invented town?
It's kind of odd, and sort of...I don't know. 5/10 ~~~ It's all a dream. Yeah... just a dream.
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| Martel |
May 13 2006, 04:34 AM
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 Shy Group: Arcs Posts: 37 Joined: 6-May 06 Member No.: 118 |
woops must have forgotten the name of the town where Fia and Lina live. :-(
~~~ "What was his name again? Midale?" - When one does not remember Milanor's name.
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| San |
May 13 2006, 04:35 AM
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 Shy Group: Arcs Posts: 37 Joined: 15-August 07 From: Under a Bridge Member No.: 1637 |
*cough*elendia*cough*
~~~  Ok, according to the "How Evil Are You?" quiz, I´m pure evil. According to the FF-Fan quiz, I´m Laguna. According to the "What Pokemon Are You?" quiz I´m a..... BUTTERFREE!? |
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| Raij|Away |
May 13 2006, 04:35 AM
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Casual Chatter Group: People Too Lazy to Register Posts: 72 Joined: 10-July 07 Member No.: 1614 |
And like I said I'm horrible at writing.
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| whoyodaddy |
May 13 2006, 04:36 AM
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 Had 2 cookies than ate 1 Group: Arcs Posts: 190 Joined: 4-January 06 From: U.S.A Member No.: 36 |
Just practice and you'll get better.
~~~  Even a hero is just a person. And people are suseptable to all kinds of injury or pain. |
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| Disaresta |
May 13 2006, 04:37 AM
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 Lazy Group: Arcs Posts: 14 Joined: 25-December 06 Member No.: 420 |
ok, if you say so.
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| untouch |
May 14 2006, 04:40 AM
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 Lazy Group: Arcs Posts: 24 Joined: 27-December 05 Member No.: 23 |
Well...
To be honest, I just think of it as a random idea... But I'm sure you can get better. ~~~  Things change, things really change |
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| elroid |
May 14 2006, 07:10 AM
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 Lazy Group: Arcs Posts: 4 Joined: 14-April 10 Member No.: 2045 |
Actually it was a random idea. XD
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