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			 Like the topic title suggest, I finally finished writing the first chapter of a new story.
  However, english isn't my first language and I'm sure the chapter I just wrote has many grammar mistakes.
  Thus, I ask if someone could find those mistakes and tell me how to correct them.
  The fic is a Makai Kingdom fic. I think it would be better if someone who know the game help me, since they won't get lost in the story, but I won't refuse any help.
  Edit: Well... Look like I'll go ask somewhere else. Thanks anyway for those who considered it.
  This post has been edited by Megaolix: Oct 5 2006, 10:59 PM 
			
			
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