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| zesler |
 Sep 6 2007, 03:18 AM
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 Casual Chatter  Group: Arcs Posts: 74 Joined: 25-June 07 Member No.: 1579  |
Dearly Beloved.
A chronicle of Various Happenings in Prince Ein's life, including Hiding from Rose and Dodging Matrimony. And then of course there's A Certain Blonde Knight. This is probably the most trite and verbose "love story" you'll ever see outside of the field of Victorian prose. Sadly, it's not even funny. I think. Anyway, I'm putting it up solely for the purpose of getting it looked at (and potentially ripped apart), since I know there's plenty wrong with it. I wrote it on the premise of "Oh, it's an alternate universe, so of course Certain Riviera-Plot Related Events will not have happened, such as A Certain Sacrifice One Particular Character Makes." Thus somebody will be terrifically out of character. Yikes. I don't write enough taciturn people. I need to practice. ~~~ "If it is possible to manipulate this thread, then it will be possible to control everything in the world." -Luminous Arc
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| Silver Seraph |
Sep 6 2007, 11:55 PM
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Lazy Group: Arcs Posts: 14 Joined: 20-July 06 From: Los Angeles, California Member No.: 171 |
QUOTE(H. Tsukiyono @ Sep 5 2007, 11:18 PM)  Sadly, it's not even funny. I think. I thought "you beautiful idiots" was pretty funny (since I've heard it used to describe me). Then it again it might be just me who thinks it funny. -Dusty This post has been edited by DustyHaru: Sep 6 2007, 11:55 PM |
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| Ryu2 |
Sep 7 2007, 06:34 AM
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 Shy Group: Arcs Posts: 29 Joined: 5-December 06 Member No.: 326 |
... It was sort of supposed to be part of a serious moment, but hey. If it's humorous to somebody, then by all means let it be. Humor seems to be a redeeming feature of a lot of things. ._.;;
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| MoloMowChow |
 Sep 7 2007, 12:08 PM
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 I have a bitch for a twin sister. That means I'm a stupid fu Group: Naughty Children Posts: 103 Joined: 1-January 06 From: Whoreville Member No.: 35 |
:DDD Am so reading and reviewing this as soon as I get the chance. X333
[EDIT] Read. And. ILU. This was such a well-thought-out AU; you are as much win as you ever were. *hugs* This post has been edited by Feral Phoenix: Sep 10 2007, 05:20 PM ~~~ im a moran who takes the internet too seriusly and got banned becuz my sister was a bitch :(
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