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post Feb 15 2006, 03:03 AM
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Anyways.....

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I watched with disinterest as Ein spent the day fraternizing with Fia. Since Fia is a gentle and quiet, she has turned out to be quite the unexciting person. As I watched them awkwardly try to start a conversation, I'm left in utter amazement how dense Ein is. That thick head may save him in battle, but when it comes to courting females, Ein's thick head only gets in the way.

When nightfall came on the first day, I listened intently to the story that she told.

"Ein? Would you like to hear a story?" Fia asked as the sun disappeared over the horizon.

"Absolutely Fia."



I thought I might take a part from another chapter since everyone has already seen the first chapter to death.


UPDATE: I have finished the story. ENJOY. Comments go here, if you want to review (Please follow the link to my story at ffnet and leave a review there please XD. Feed my ego and my stats) But if you're lazy, just go to the fiction link on the site itself. Sturm (thank you Sturm) will have it up shortly if he is up to it.

MY STORY

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post Feb 17 2006, 06:08 AM
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For the record. I DID update it the day before Valentine's day.


(In case anyone forgot, or just didn't care.)
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post Feb 17 2006, 09:10 AM
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Yikes, I haven't read the latest chapter! *runs of to read*


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post Feb 17 2006, 10:35 PM
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*laughs* Poor valkan, you just have so much trouble updating don't you?

That's part of the reason I don't want any jobs other than school...


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post Feb 18 2006, 03:51 AM
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Well.... I'd like to say that the reason I hadn't updated until now was because of my job but.....


I'm a nitpicker, and I had like 4 cases of writing block I had to overcome.

That and a few personal problems kept me from updating as well.
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post Feb 26 2006, 10:44 PM
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Poor baby. XD


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post Apr 8 2006, 05:36 PM
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I suppose I should say something.


I'm currently working on another story right now, I'll pick up Riviera when I'm done with it's chapter.


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post Apr 9 2006, 12:09 AM
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I was writing something.... Maybe I should go do that... >.<

Fia <3


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post Apr 9 2006, 08:20 PM
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Heh, isn't that always the way of things :3


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post Apr 10 2006, 05:03 AM
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Well story I haven't updated in almost a year. So yeah, it is.
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post Jun 5 2006, 07:19 PM
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Since I just updated my Outlaw Star story, I'm gonna move back to Riviera. I've got a few good ideas working for the next chapter, so I'll get started right away.


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post Jun 10 2006, 01:41 AM
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*cheers* Go, valkan~ We'll be rooting for you~ XD


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post Aug 28 2006, 05:23 PM
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BLOCK THE BANE OF ALL WRITERS.


I'm having trouble again :P. Maybe it's my subconscious desire not to finish writing my story that's preventing me from updating it :P.


But I do have alot of it written already, and here's an excerpt:

SPOILERS!!!!


» Click to show Spoiler - click again to hide... «



Nevermind. Thanks to a friend I have inspiration to write. GO GO GO.

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post Sep 7 2006, 12:21 PM
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» Click to show Spoiler - click again to hide... «


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post Mar 27 2007, 03:35 AM
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I FINISHED IT CHECK THE FIRST POST FOR DETAILS.
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