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| Feral Phoenix |
 May 12 2006, 03:31 AM
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 Angelus Artifax  Group: Arcs Posts: 1516 Joined: 28-December 05 From: Ancardia Member No.: 29  |
Well it is going to take sometime to finish it. Iam half way to finishing it.
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| sandpenguin |
May 13 2006, 04:24 AM
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 3 Years passed and it all make a difference. Group: Flunkies Posts: 397 Joined: 4-August 07 From: Bolehland, go figure. Member No.: 1630 |
Note:This is my first time writing a fiction story. And yes it is very random and very off topic on the Rivera story line.
Elinda’s Musician’s You think you know the story about the famous Grim Angel; Ein and but you probably do not know that he was also musician. Ein played the Trombone; since he was a kid always played and performed for a yearly ceremony. So this is was the intro explaining the intro and what you need to know,now with the story. Lina: Fiiaa! Fia chose to ignore Lina because she thought Lina was just trying to get attention. Lina: Fiiiiaaaa!!!! With lost of patience she finally answered her. Fia: yes? Lina: He is awake! Fia: He is! Ein: where…. am…. I? Lina: you’re at our house. Fia: I don’t think that is what he meant. Where at a town called Elinda, and it is the time of the yearly celebration……oh…. wait I forgot to ask your name. Ein: I’m Ein, so what is this celebration you are talking about? Fia: It is a celebration in which we celebrate the gods; there is a big party with music, food, and prayer. Lina: Were playing in the band, I play the flute and Fia plays the trombone. Ein: (The trombone why does that sound familiar?)Can I see your trombone please Fia? Fia: Sure I guess? <><><><><><><><><><><><><><><><><><><><>><><><><> Lina: Whoa that was amazing! He played perfectly! Fia: Yeah you’re right. How did you play so perfectly? Did you take any lessons? Ein: I’m not sure. (How come I can play the trombone but not remember anything else?) Lina: Maybe you should play in the band with Fia and me? Fia: I’m not sure; he could still not be feeling well. Ein: No I’m fine, besides it should be a lot of fun. <><><><><><><><><><><><><><><><><><><><><><><><> 1...2…1...2...3… Lina: get ready Fia! Fia: get ready Ein! Ein: don’t worry I’ll be fine. (Why can’t I remember a thing!?, hey wait a minute that is it!) Lina: Psst, Fia why did Ein leave like that. Fia: don’t know, but it is probably something important. The End. Again I will say it again, yes I don’t say this often but it is true I suck at writingand it is my first time to. Please don’t write any hateful comments. ~~~  Governance is frickin hard. |
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| SyphonVectorman |
May 13 2006, 04:31 AM
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 Talkative Group: Arcs Posts: 106 Joined: 17-March 07 Member No.: 829 |
What's Elinda? Some kind of invented town?
It's kind of odd, and sort of...I don't know. 5/10 |
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| Aekari |
May 13 2006, 04:34 AM
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 Shy Group: Arcs Posts: 43 Joined: 1-December 06 Member No.: 311 |
woops must have forgotten the name of the town where Fia and Lina live. :-(
~~~ "Do you see anything? It seems to me I am trying to tell you a dream - making a vain attempt, beceause no relation of a dream can convey the dream sensation, that commingling of absurdity, surprise, and bewilderment in a tremor of struggling revolt, that notion of being captured by the incredible which is the very essence of dreams...."
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| ngaurhoth1 |
May 13 2006, 04:35 AM
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Shy Group: Arcs Posts: 46 Joined: 27-October 08 Member No.: 1803 |
*cough*elendia*cough*
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| zesler |
May 13 2006, 04:35 AM
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 Casual Chatter Group: Arcs Posts: 74 Joined: 25-June 07 Member No.: 1579 |
And like I said I'm horrible at writing.
~~~ "If it is possible to manipulate this thread, then it will be possible to control everything in the world." -Luminous Arc
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| Ruby Eyes Yuan |
May 13 2006, 04:36 AM
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 Lazy Group: Arcs Posts: 12 Joined: 29-November 06 From: Somewhere In Riviera Member No.: 301 |
Just practice and you'll get better.
~~~ "I am well aware of the legacy the Grim Angels created, but it is not the kind of life I desire." - Yuan; Ruby and Crimson (A Riviera Fanfiction)
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| grimangel |
May 13 2006, 04:37 AM
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Lazy Group: Arcs Posts: 14 Joined: 25-August 09 Member No.: 1959 |
ok, if you say so.
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| paperweight |
May 14 2006, 04:40 AM
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 Shy Group: Arcs Posts: 38 Joined: 15-August 06 Member No.: 192 |
Well...
To be honest, I just think of it as a random idea... But I'm sure you can get better. ~~~ It's all a dream. Yeah... just a dream.
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| el Sethro |
May 14 2006, 07:10 AM
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 Lazy Group: Arcs Posts: 12 Joined: 1-August 06 From: Sethrotopia Member No.: 180 |
Actually it was a random idea. XD
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