 Bittersweet Sweetberry, My latest fanfiction! |
 | ||||
 |  |  |  |  |
  |
| CardBoardBox |
 Jul 8 2007, 07:05 AM
Post
#1
|
|
Casual Chatter  Group: Arcs Posts: 51 Joined: 16-February 10 Member No.: 2040  |
http://www.fanfiction.net/s/3642886/1/
There we go. My latest fanfiction! The 1st chapter is a little short... I'll work on making this one longer then Whispered Regret, and trying my hand at a Romance/Comedy =p I'm possibly thinking of making this one a part of a series that shall be so far just called 'Sweetberry'. 'Cause I'm unoriginal like that and really would like to have more then oneshot YggdraxRosary relationships. Anyway, leave your reviews on fanfiction.net, unless you lack an account or something. Then tell me here. =p Remember! Constructive critisim will help! I think there is too much talking in this one honesty *sigh* Oh. And yes, the fanfic's real name is Japanese. But since I can't type it here, just call it 'Bittersweet Sweetberry'. Ignore the [ on the title. It seems FF.net deleted the 2nd one. EDIT: lulz. It's the 20th fanfiction in the YU section! Go me! This post has been edited by Suzu Fujibayashi: Jul 8 2007, 05:54 PM |
   |
 
|
| yip9 |
Jul 9 2007, 05:23 PM
Post
#2
|
|
Shy Group: Arcs Posts: 33 Joined: 23-June 08 Member No.: 1749 |
I ALREADY REVIEWED IT HAHA.
~~~ I play Riviera for two reasons:
  IIRC, credits go to Feral Phoenix for Fiaa's icon and ChefMKT for the Lyuri scan. |
|
|
|
| SyphonVectorman |
Jul 9 2007, 06:47 PM
Post
#3
|
 Talkative Group: Arcs Posts: 106 Joined: 17-March 07 Member No.: 829 |
Thanks for the review ^_^
I'll start up the next chapter today when I finish my Nanoha marathon XD I might finish and upload by today, or sometime tomorrow. |
|
|
|
| Marionette |
Jul 17 2007, 10:14 PM
Post
#4
|
 The Comedy of Errors Group: Knights Posts: 615 Joined: 24-December 05 From: Puerto Rico Member No.: 11 |
Sorry for the double post, but the next chapter is up. It's short but... I blame that on this chapter has taken far longer then it should and I kept putting it off.
I'll try to make the next chapters longer... Maybe if more people read and reviewed it I'd feel more motivated to make it longer... *Hit by baseball bat* ~~~   |
|
|
|
| Lite-Yoshi |
Jul 17 2007, 11:36 PM
Post
#5
|
 Lazy Group: Arcs Posts: 20 Joined: 18-May 09 From: California, but not in the OC Member No.: 1886 |
I calp for you, Suzu! My voracious appetite for words has been near-satisified with this short, yet interesting work!
*waits patiently for chapter 3* Believe me, the summer SUCKS. ~~~ To be: The Guy-Play I Wanna Be The Guy, still awake-drink coffee, happy-party up, seen-stand up, heard-speak up, respected-shut up.
Recent Feats: + Games: - Completed Ys SEVEN (Normal, Lv. 61 average, 23:47 in-game time) Now waiting for: - Ys I & II Chronicles US Localization (confirmed date on February 15, 2011) - FEAR 3 and Portal 2 (coming April 2011) |
|
|
|
| Acras |
Jul 18 2007, 12:32 AM
Post
#6
|
|
Lazy Group: Arcs Posts: 2 Joined: 29-March 12 Member No.: 2667 |
Hahahaha thanks ;D
Tell all your friends to read and review bwhahahahahah! Your reviews power my doomsday dev- Errr... Youdidnthearanything. And yeah it does. WAY TOO HOT. Totally doesn't wanna make me do ANYTHING. |
|
|
|
| Hitoshura |
Jul 18 2007, 05:40 PM
Post
#7
|
 Lazy Group: Arcs Posts: 1 Joined: 14-May 10 Member No.: 2057 |
I reviewed it too.
Can I help with the doomsday device? |
|
|
|
| Jomei |
Jul 18 2007, 07:23 PM
Post
#8
|
 Lazy Group: Arcs Posts: 10 Joined: 19-July 06 Member No.: 170 |
Good, good. None of you have ever read Satashi's Onyx Days... XD
Not that it matters. I only took a fewwwww lines from it and changed it <_< (The whole 'hot' thing was taken from there, more or less x: ) I think this might be 4 or 5 chapters long maybeh. Then I think I'll write more based on it... 'Cause I've already said I'd like to make a fic where Yggdra and Rosary has already happened so they can have like some super secret relationship <3 I'll try to update soon. Try. D: Just a matter of how lazy/distracted I get. And yes you can Feral. : D This post has been edited by Suzu Fujibayashi: Jul 18 2007, 07:23 PM |
|
|
|
| Dark Tempest |
Jul 18 2007, 07:48 PM
Post
#9
|
 Lazy Group: Arcs Posts: 15 Joined: 6-February 09 Member No.: 1837 |
YAY
~~~ I am the Chaos, the Darkness, the Destruction...
|
|
|
|
| Skie |
Jul 20 2007, 04:32 AM
Post
#10
|
 Lazy Group: Arcs Posts: 12 Joined: 15-March 08 Member No.: 1708 |
I think the next chapter will take longer. I uhhh... Started playing a certain MMO again and uhm... Kinda taking up all my time... :<
Blame the fact my friend gets all emo-emo whenever I don't talk to him. EDIT: The chapter will take a lot longer. I don't feel like it anymore. I'm just... In a bad mood now. I won't bother ranting about it, since I doubt any of you care aside from a few. Just, personal issues stopping me now I guess... This post has been edited by Suzu Fujibayashi: Jul 20 2007, 05:34 AM ~~~  |
|
|
|
| Malice no Kokushi |
Jul 20 2007, 12:29 PM
Post
#11
|
 Lazy Group: Arcs Posts: 10 Joined: 2-July 06 From: Italy Member No.: 156 |
Too hot and out of the zone... I sympathize. (I reviewed, I'm called Carnage Falcon on FF.net).
I'm suffering from a similar problem right now. I can't concentrate on anything because it's TOO - FREAKIN' - COLD! (Coldest day since records began? Global warming, my butt). Mental note - trim down the ranting. Main point: We can wait for the chapter. Good work is worth the wait. ~~~ <div style="background: rgb(112, 112, 112) none repeat scroll 0%; -moz-background-clip: -moz-initial; -moz-background-origin: -moz-initial; -moz-background-inline-policy: -moz-initial; text-align: center;">No future.
マリスは凄まじい破壊力を持っています。</div> |
|
|
|
| Martel |
Jul 20 2007, 07:37 PM
Post
#12
|
 Shy Group: Arcs Posts: 37 Joined: 6-May 06 Member No.: 118 |
QUOTE(Another Necromancer @ Jul 20 2007, 12:29 PM)  Main point: We can wait for the chapter. Good work is worth the wait. Agreed. ^_^ ~~~ "What was his name again? Midale?" - When one does not remember Milanor's name.
|
|
|
|
| San |
Jul 22 2007, 02:59 PM
Post
#13
|
 Shy Group: Arcs Posts: 37 Joined: 15-August 07 From: Under a Bridge Member No.: 1637 |
Good to know you don't mind a wait, since I also got the newest Harry Potter book this could take longer then I expected but... XD
I'm a quick reader so this shouldn't be much of a hassle. But I will try to get to this when I have the chance... ~~~  Ok, according to the "How Evil Are You?" quiz, I´m pure evil. According to the FF-Fan quiz, I´m Laguna. According to the "What Pokemon Are You?" quiz I´m a..... BUTTERFREE!? |
|
|
|
| Disaresta |
Jul 31 2007, 04:00 AM
Post
#14
|
 Lazy Group: Arcs Posts: 14 Joined: 25-December 06 Member No.: 420 |
I hate double posting. But chapter 3 is up! Nearly 2,000 words makes it my longest chapter ever I think! XD
Please read and review... :3 |
|
|
|
| Chaos |
Jul 31 2007, 04:29 AM
Post
#15
|
 Shy Group: Arcs Posts: 25 Joined: 20-March 08 From: another castle Member No.: 1711 |
QUOTE(Suzu Fujibayashi @ Jul 31 2007, 12:00 AM) Nearly 2,000 words makes it my longest chapter ever I think! XD I usually aim for that number before I'm satisfied with the word count. Maybe this is why I can never actually write a long thingy. Anyways, I'll consider looking into this. ~~~ I USE A MAC
|
|
|
|
|
1 User(s) are reading this topic (1 Guests and 0 Anonymous Users)
0 Members:
| Lo-Fi Version | Time is now: 23rd April 2025 - 01:28 PM |
Invision Power Board
v2.1.4 © 2025 IPS, Inc.