 The Resurrection, Sucks as always |
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| Raijinili |
 Jun 18 2006, 08:00 PM
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| Raijinili |
Jun 18 2006, 10:02 PM
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Lieutenant Group: Gods Posts: 2539 Joined: 25-December 05 Member No.: 16 |
Awesome!! You don't suck, you just need a little work but all in all, it was pretty damn cool. But one question, why Ledah?
Do I detect a hint of yaoi romance :> ? ~~~ |
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| Raijinili |
Jun 19 2006, 09:17 AM
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Lieutenant Group: Gods Posts: 2539 Joined: 25-December 05 Member No.: 16 |
Whoa whoa, hold on. Where did it say that Lina was Fia's sister? O_o; Coco hinted that they were related somehow, but she never exactly said what it was. Anyway, other than that, the idea itself was great. The fighting scenes are probably one of the hardest to write about since it happens so fast which was where you struggled a bit.
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| Raijinili |
Jun 19 2006, 01:15 PM
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Lieutenant Group: Gods Posts: 2539 Joined: 25-December 05 Member No.: 16 |
They're not related.
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| Raijinili |
Jun 19 2006, 04:04 PM
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Lieutenant Group: Gods Posts: 2539 Joined: 25-December 05 Member No.: 16 |
Well I say they are so :P!
I picked Ledah, cause I'm a Ledah superfanboy! Duh :) I just wanted to finish so I spen through the fight scene ~~~ |
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