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> I am actually going to write one.
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post May 12 2006, 03:31 AM
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Well it is going to take sometime to finish it. Iam half way to finishing it.


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post May 13 2006, 04:24 AM
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Note:This is my first time writing a fiction story. And yes it is very random and very off topic on the Rivera story line.

Elinda’s Musician’s

You think you know the story about the famous Grim Angel; Ein and but you probably do not know that he was also musician. Ein played the Trombone; since he was a kid always played and performed for a yearly ceremony. So this is was the intro explaining the intro and what you need to know,now with the story.

Lina: Fiiaa!
Fia chose to ignore Lina because she thought Lina was just trying to get attention.
Lina: Fiiiiaaaa!!!!
With lost of patience she finally answered her.
Fia: yes?
Lina: He is awake!
Fia: He is!
Ein: where…. am…. I?
Lina: you’re at our house.
Fia: I don’t think that is what he meant. Where at a town called Elinda, and it is the time of the yearly celebration……oh…. wait I forgot to ask your name.
Ein: I’m Ein, so what is this celebration you are talking about?
Fia: It is a celebration in which we celebrate the gods; there is a big party with music, food, and prayer.
Lina: Were playing in the band, I play the flute and Fia plays the trombone.
Ein: (The trombone why does that sound familiar?)Can I see your trombone please Fia?
Fia: Sure I guess?
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Lina: Whoa that was amazing! He played perfectly!
Fia: Yeah you’re right. How did you play so perfectly? Did you take any lessons?
Ein: I’m not sure. (How come I can play the trombone but not remember anything else?)
Lina: Maybe you should play in the band with Fia and me?
Fia: I’m not sure; he could still not be feeling well.
Ein: No I’m fine, besides it should be a lot of fun.
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1...2…1...2...3…
Lina: get ready Fia!
Fia: get ready Ein!
Ein: don’t worry I’ll be fine. (Why can’t I remember a thing!?, hey wait a minute that is it!)
Lina: Psst, Fia why did Ein leave like that.
Fia: don’t know, but it is probably something important.

The End.

Again I will say it again, yes I don’t say this often but it is true I suck at writingand it is my first time to. Please don’t write any hateful comments.





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post May 13 2006, 04:31 AM
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What's Elinda? Some kind of invented town?

It's kind of odd, and sort of...I don't know.

5/10


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post May 13 2006, 04:34 AM
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woops must have forgotten the name of the town where Fia and Lina live. :-(


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post May 13 2006, 04:35 AM
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*cough*elendia*cough*


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post May 13 2006, 04:35 AM
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And like I said I'm horrible at writing.


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post May 13 2006, 04:36 AM
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Just practice and you'll get better.


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post May 13 2006, 04:37 AM
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ok, if you say so.


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post May 14 2006, 04:40 AM
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Well...

To be honest, I just think of it as a random idea...

But I'm sure you can get better.


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post May 14 2006, 07:10 AM
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Actually it was a random idea. XD


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