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Raijinili
post Apr 25 2006, 02:12 AM
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i guess i should let u guys know up front, im writing a fanfic called
"Neibilim Advent" it takes place after Ein and the crew save Riviera and they've gone back to Elendia suffering the loss of Cierra and Serene, but the world still isn't safe, as because the remaining Magi have plotted that Ein would defeat the "fool" Hector and planned to take up where he left off. With Ein the last grim angel and two of his companions gone Ein has no idea how to stop this new threat. The magi are planning to bring about the rise of Neibilim, the Underworld and destroy both Riviera and Asgard so that Miastigma can infect and turn all beings into bloodlusty, vicious, demons. The remaining Magi are Vanir-the Naive magus, Freyr-the Ardent magus, Loki-the Mischevious magus, Valkyrie-the Noble magus, Tyr- the Stubborn magus, and Freya- the Tyrannical magus. Ein, Fiaa and Lyuri have to find, fight, and destroy each of the six of them and then scatter their ashes across Riviera to turn everybody and everything into its original form, This is a long, daunting, and very difficult task, but it has to be done. Oh and for the Cierra and Serene superfanboy/girls out there, there not really gone for good...


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Raijinili
post Apr 25 2006, 02:43 AM
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Serene better come back! ;-;

Hmm, I was just wondering one thing. You use the names Lyuri and Fiaa, but you used Ein instead of Etchel? >_>; It's just my opinion but, I think that you should either stick to the japanese names or the english names and not combine them.


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Raijinili
post Apr 25 2006, 03:48 PM
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i meant to use ecthal but i got mixed up between games


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post Apr 25 2006, 09:52 PM
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Ah right. =P


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post Apr 26 2006, 08:12 PM
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um...how does one go about submitting a fanfic?


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post Apr 27 2006, 12:41 AM
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Please don't write a fanfic with a misspelling of "you".

Email or PM to valkan.


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post Apr 27 2006, 04:33 PM
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ok um...thx, what mispelling of 'you'?

and i've decided to use the english names because everybody else usually does


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