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[Raijinili]

Yeah, why does Fia have these weird things on the front? It looks impossible to put on.

Her ears should be more visible.

The other three look too sexualized.

[Raijinili]

Still can't wait for it. How's the ein and ledah character design going?

[Raijinili]

Wow impressive redesigns indeed o_o
I like them all really. And on the topic of H-scenes you may need to be more specific. After all a H-scene doesn't 100% of the time mean sex. Could just be nudity.
*Shrug*

[Raijinili]

ORZ

I..didn't know this thing could make me stressed out...
If only I have better artistic skill this wouldn't bother me too much...
Problem is I'm not the one drawing and she's doing this on her own good will so it's really painful for me to ask her to redesign Fia seeing I kinda like the design, I asked her to change the ribbons back to normal so yeah I hope that'll solve the things.

I'm not sure about the sexualized stuff seeing that's her art style?

This post has been edited by Archeia: Jun 8 2008, 07:18 AM

[Raijinili]

I love your friend's art style

[Raijinili]

W-well, thank goodness it's ok for Aya to make some changes to the redesigns, so aside from changing Fia's ribbons and reducing the number of belts of her design do you guys have any suggestions for the other characters?

This way we won't have to redesign over and over again ;_;

*sulks in corner*

[Raijinili]

Cierra, Rose and Meute look especially hot. <3
And yes I agree that these things around Fia's ear look weird.

[Raijinili]

No particular complaints with the rest of them really.

[Raijinili]

Seconded.

[Raijinili]

Cierra looks REALLY sexy.
Keep it up, Archeia!

[Raijinili]

Aside from Fia's belts and ribbon, I don't like how her top thingy looks. The green part, I mean. It looks out of place. Like there's not enough green on her outfit for it to not look wrong, I guess. I don't know, maybe it will look better if there's one less belt near it, but right now it just looks strange to me.

Only one other problem. This one is with Serene, though. It's the white part of the end of her skirt. It looks... odd. Like it's just a sheet or something. It's probably because it's so separated from the blue part, but I don't know and I don't think it looks good.

Everything else is fine.

[Raijinili]

Hmm..when I look at the poll vote result,it seem that many people prefer playing as Ein and other character than Cierra,serene,lina and fia..And to much my suprise no one vote fia...yet.

Edit:oh crap forgot to check the vote carefully.

This post has been edited by CATGUN: Jun 16 2008, 10:29 AM

[Raijinili]

Well, I don't see Fia as the main character of a Sim Dating game.

I'll probably play as one of the new characters, since I don't really like Ein.

[Raijinili]

Well since this was bumped, might as well say the progress.

Almost done with the beginning's script, after that, the game :P
Maybe I'll release a short demo sometime after aya finished the first few portraits :')

This post has been edited by Archeia: Jun 16 2008, 10:15 PM

[Raijinili]

Here's a reasonable update :d

Cierra, Lina, Serene, Meute and Rose Redesigns :3

http://fc03.deviantart.com/fs27/f/2008/153...243ded083f6.jpg
http://fc04.deviantart.com/fs26/f/2008/153...a82dc359c14.jpg
http://fc06.deviantart.com/fs26/f/2008/153...7fe2c0b5ae1.jpg
http://fc08.deviantart.com/fs29/f/2008/153...6b46c9a4a3b.jpg

And my pathetic attempt to make a Title Screen

http://img138.imageshack.us/img138/9607/ttlscreencopywl4.png

I personally like the design on the Girls, and all that you do, also I can recommend you that revise your designs ad all, if something presents PM me