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Raijinili
post Apr 9 2008, 01:58 AM
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New chapter officially get the thumbs up. Poor Nessiah really needs to straighten out what having friends means...

I am going to review on FF.net. Really. As soon as I recover my password...

BTW, the links in your profile seem broken. Clicking one just gave me a new tab with your profile page again. Dunno why...


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post Apr 9 2008, 12:20 PM
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FF.Net eats links. :/ When you open the page, delete the FF.Net URL in front and fix the actual URL, and you'll get there.

If that doesn't work, then you can find them here:

Kylier
~Bellatrix Calida~
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Virude
Audacia
Septentrio
Jupiter
Artifact: Speculum Verus

Yggdra
~Regina Idealistica~
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Aurum
Justitia
Centrum
Sol
Artifact: SPOILER :>

We will, of course, have some more new cards to upload soon~

Oh, and anonymous reviews are fine. T_T Just get me reviews~


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post Apr 14 2008, 01:02 AM
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Read and reviewed. =D

=/ I'm probably the world's worst reviewer, primarily because I never know what to say. So it's quite long, and most of it boils down to about maybe three lines, but you kind of deserve more than three lines so I let it wax longer. >> Basically, "Yay! I like Roswell and Nessiah. I also like your writing. Huzzah! Cheers." >> Except it's been elaborated a little bit, so... yes. =D


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post Apr 16 2008, 12:16 PM
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Elaboration is good, and you're far from the world's worst reviewer. Long reviews tend to be better reviews, just so you know. :/

Waiting for a few more reviews on this chapter before I start seriously nagging my beta to finish up with Chapter 8... so, to those who've read it: Opinions on Roswell and Nessiah's relationship so far? :>


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post May 31 2008, 08:32 PM
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DOUBLE POST DUE TO UPDATE

Chapter 8 - ways that you touched me

Chapter 9 - balm for broken glass

Reviews are always nice.

ALSO.

The Soul's Riven Gate
Sometimes, we need the most human of connections to survive. It may not be a perfect cure for loneliness or madness, but for now it will suffice. (Roswell/Nessiah)

^I rewrote this completely. Took the old one down, so if you reviewed it before you can do so again.

BUT PLEASE READ THE WARNINGS FIRST. The new version is significantly darker and the sexual content is... well, I'm writing it, what do you think?

This is part of the DSS continuity. Readers of the main story should check out the oneshot after finishing chapter 9. :> And there are links to the new pactio cards on my profile.


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post Oct 25 2009, 03:44 AM
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I love this fic! A little uncomfortable at some parts, but the BEST[u] anyway! Ahh... the current Bronqia, the festival... I can see it! I eagerly await the next chapter after 'stainglass sky'!

\(^w^)/ {Mwe-hee!


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