Dearly Beloved, AU and LxE. You may shoot me if you so wish. Options

[Raijinili]

Dearly Beloved.

A chronicle of Various Happenings in Prince Ein's life, including Hiding from Rose and Dodging Matrimony. And then of course there's A Certain Blonde Knight.


This is probably the most trite and verbose "love story" you'll ever see outside of the field of Victorian prose. Sadly, it's not even funny. I think. Anyway, I'm putting it up solely for the purpose of getting it looked at (and potentially ripped apart), since I know there's plenty wrong with it. I wrote it on the premise of "Oh, it's an alternate universe, so of course Certain Riviera-Plot Related Events will not have happened, such as A Certain Sacrifice One Particular Character Makes." Thus somebody will be terrifically out of character. Yikes.

I don't write enough taciturn people. I need to practice. And I might not even have put it up here, but I'm a review wh0re and the potential for feedback got the better of me. ;_;