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New Year Short Stories, I think this is the third time....

Raijinili	Feb 15 2006, 03:03 AM Post #1
Lieutenant Group: Gods Posts: 2539 Joined: 25-December 05 Member No.: 16	Anyways..... Excerpt: I watched with disinterest as Ein spent the day fraternizing with Fia. Since Fia is a gentle and quiet, she has turned out to be quite the unexciting person. As I watched them awkwardly try to start a conversation, I'm left in utter amazement how dense Ein is. That thick head may save him in battle, but when it comes to courting females, Ein's thick head only gets in the way. When nightfall came on the first day, I listened intently to the story that she told. "Ein? Would you like to hear a story?" Fia asked as the sun disappeared over the horizon. "Absolutely Fia." I thought I might take a part from another chapter since everyone has already seen the first chapter to death. UPDATE: I have finished the story. ENJOY. Comments go here, if you want to review (Please follow the link to my story at ffnet and leave a review there please XD. Feed my ego and my stats) But if you're lazy, just go to the fiction link on the site itself. Sturm (thank you Sturm) will have it up shortly if he is up to it. MY STORY This post has been edited by valkan: Mar 27 2007, 03:37 AM ~~~

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Raijinili	Feb 17 2006, 06:08 AM Post #2
Lieutenant Group: Gods Posts: 2539 Joined: 25-December 05 Member No.: 16	For the record. I DID update it the day before Valentine's day. (In case anyone forgot, or just didn't care.) ~~~

Raijinili	Feb 17 2006, 09:10 AM Post #3
Lieutenant Group: Gods Posts: 2539 Joined: 25-December 05 Member No.: 16	Yikes, I haven't read the latest chapter! runs of to read ~~~

Raijinili	Feb 17 2006, 10:35 PM Post #4
Lieutenant Group: Gods Posts: 2539 Joined: 25-December 05 Member No.: 16	laughs Poor valkan, you just have so much trouble updating don't you? That's part of the reason I don't want any jobs other than school... ~~~

Raijinili	Feb 18 2006, 03:51 AM Post #5
Lieutenant Group: Gods Posts: 2539 Joined: 25-December 05 Member No.: 16	Well.... I'd like to say that the reason I hadn't updated until now was because of my job but..... I'm a nitpicker, and I had like 4 cases of writing block I had to overcome. That and a few personal problems kept me from updating as well. ~~~

Raijinili	Feb 26 2006, 10:44 PM Post #6
Lieutenant Group: Gods Posts: 2539 Joined: 25-December 05 Member No.: 16	Poor baby. XD ~~~

Raijinili	Apr 8 2006, 05:36 PM Post #7
Lieutenant Group: Gods Posts: 2539 Joined: 25-December 05 Member No.: 16	I suppose I should say something. I'm currently working on another story right now, I'll pick up Riviera when I'm done with it's chapter. ~~~

Raijinili	Apr 9 2006, 12:09 AM Post #8
Lieutenant Group: Gods Posts: 2539 Joined: 25-December 05 Member No.: 16	I was writing something.... Maybe I should go do that... >.< Fia <3 ~regruBgniK ~~~

Raijinili	Apr 9 2006, 08:20 PM Post #9
Lieutenant Group: Gods Posts: 2539 Joined: 25-December 05 Member No.: 16	Heh, isn't that always the way of things :3 ~~~

Raijinili	Apr 10 2006, 05:03 AM Post #10
Lieutenant Group: Gods Posts: 2539 Joined: 25-December 05 Member No.: 16	Well story I haven't updated in almost a year. So yeah, it is. ~~~

Raijinili	Jun 5 2006, 07:19 PM Post #11
Lieutenant Group: Gods Posts: 2539 Joined: 25-December 05 Member No.: 16	Since I just updated my Outlaw Star story, I'm gonna move back to Riviera. I've got a few good ideas working for the next chapter, so I'll get started right away. ~~~

Raijinili	Jun 10 2006, 01:41 AM Post #12
Lieutenant Group: Gods Posts: 2539 Joined: 25-December 05 Member No.: 16	cheers Go, valkan~ We'll be rooting for you~ XD ~~~

Raijinili	Aug 28 2006, 05:23 PM Post #13
Lieutenant Group: Gods Posts: 2539 Joined: 25-December 05 Member No.: 16	BLOCK THE BANE OF ALL WRITERS. I'm having trouble again :P. Maybe it's my subconscious desire not to finish writing my story that's preventing me from updating it :P. But I do have alot of it written already, and here's an excerpt: SPOILERS!!!! » Click to show Spoiler - click again to hide... « I am disappointed. Today is the final day of the festival and I am disappointed. I can't help but feel overly under accomplished in my task of chronicling the stories, as I focused too much on the personal life of my Master Ein. And yet... I feel no remorse for doing so. I never returned to his bed last night after I finished the other chapter. How could I? How could I return willingly, knowing that my presence was no longer needed? I find this all so very unfair. Nevermind. Thanks to a friend I have inspiration to write. GO GO GO. This post has been edited by valkan: Aug 28 2006, 05:29 PM ~~~

Raijinili	Sep 7 2006, 12:21 PM Post #14
Lieutenant Group: Gods Posts: 2539 Joined: 25-December 05 Member No.: 16	» Click to show Spoiler - click again to hide... « Oooooh, Ein/Rose? You almost NEVER see that! :D This post has been edited by Feral Phoenix: Sep 7 2006, 12:21 PM ~~~

Raijinili	Mar 27 2007, 03:35 AM Post #15
Lieutenant Group: Gods Posts: 2539 Joined: 25-December 05 Member No.: 16	I FINISHED IT CHECK THE FIRST POST FOR DETAILS. ~~~

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