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Raijinili
post Jul 8 2007, 07:05 AM
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http://www.fanfiction.net/s/3642886/1/

There we go. My latest fanfiction! The 1st chapter is a little short... I'll work on making this one longer then Whispered Regret, and trying my hand at a Romance/Comedy =p
I'm possibly thinking of making this one a part of a series that shall be so far just called 'Sweetberry'. 'Cause I'm unoriginal like that and really would like to have more then oneshot YggdraxRosary relationships.

Anyway, leave your reviews on fanfiction.net, unless you lack an account or something. Then tell me here. =p
Remember! Constructive critisim will help! I think there is too much talking in this one honesty *sigh*

Oh. And yes, the fanfic's real name is Japanese. But since I can't type it here, just call it 'Bittersweet Sweetberry'. Ignore the [ on the title. It seems FF.net deleted the 2nd one.

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lulz. It's the 20th fanfiction in the YU section! Go me!

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post Jul 9 2007, 05:23 PM
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I ALREADY REVIEWED IT HAHA.


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post Jul 9 2007, 06:47 PM
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Thanks for the review ^_^
I'll start up the next chapter today when I finish my Nanoha marathon XD
I might finish and upload by today, or sometime tomorrow.


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post Jul 17 2007, 10:14 PM
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Sorry for the double post, but the next chapter is up. It's short but... I blame that on this chapter has taken far longer then it should and I kept putting it off.

I'll try to make the next chapters longer... Maybe if more people read and reviewed it I'd feel more motivated to make it longer... *Hit by baseball bat*


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post Jul 17 2007, 11:36 PM
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I calp for you, Suzu! My voracious appetite for words has been near-satisified with this short, yet interesting work!

*waits patiently for chapter 3*

Believe me, the summer SUCKS.


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post Jul 18 2007, 12:32 AM
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Hahahaha thanks ;D
Tell all your friends to read and review bwhahahahahah! Your reviews power my doomsday dev- Errr... Youdidnthearanything.

And yeah it does. WAY TOO HOT. Totally doesn't wanna make me do ANYTHING.


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post Jul 18 2007, 05:40 PM
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I reviewed it too.

Can I help with the doomsday device?


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post Jul 18 2007, 07:23 PM
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Good, good. None of you have ever read Satashi's Onyx Days... XD
Not that it matters. I only took a fewwwww lines from it and changed it <_<
(The whole 'hot' thing was taken from there, more or less x: )

I think this might be 4 or 5 chapters long maybeh. Then I think I'll write more based on it... 'Cause I've already said I'd like to make a fic where Yggdra and Rosary has already happened so they can have like some super secret relationship <3

I'll try to update soon. Try. D: Just a matter of how lazy/distracted I get.

And yes you can Feral. : D

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post Jul 18 2007, 07:48 PM
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YAY


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post Jul 20 2007, 04:32 AM
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I think the next chapter will take longer. I uhhh... Started playing a certain MMO again and uhm... Kinda taking up all my time... :<

Blame the fact my friend gets all emo-emo whenever I don't talk to him.

EDIT:
The chapter will take a lot longer. I don't feel like it anymore. I'm just... In a bad mood now. I won't bother ranting about it, since I doubt any of you care aside from a few. Just, personal issues stopping me now I guess...

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post Jul 20 2007, 12:29 PM
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Too hot and out of the zone... I sympathize. (I reviewed, I'm called Carnage Falcon on FF.net).

I'm suffering from a similar problem right now. I can't concentrate on anything because it's TOO - FREAKIN' - COLD! (Coldest day since records began? Global warming, my butt).

Mental note - trim down the ranting.

Main point: We can wait for the chapter. Good work is worth the wait.


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post Jul 20 2007, 07:37 PM
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QUOTE(Another Necromancer @ Jul 20 2007, 12:29 PM) *
Main point: We can wait for the chapter. Good work is worth the wait.


Agreed. ^_^


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post Jul 22 2007, 02:59 PM
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Good to know you don't mind a wait, since I also got the newest Harry Potter book this could take longer then I expected but... XD
I'm a quick reader so this shouldn't be much of a hassle. But I will try to get to this when I have the chance...


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post Jul 31 2007, 04:00 AM
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I hate double posting. But chapter 3 is up! Nearly 2,000 words makes it my longest chapter ever I think! XD

Please read and review... :3


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post Jul 31 2007, 04:29 AM
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QUOTE(Suzu Fujibayashi @ Jul 31 2007, 12:00 AM) *

Nearly 2,000 words makes it my longest chapter ever I think! XD


I usually aim for that number before I'm satisfied with the word count. Maybe this is why I can never actually write a long thingy.

Anyways, I'll consider looking into this.


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