Aside from Fia's belts and ribbon, I don't like how her top thingy looks. The green part, I mean. It looks out of place. Like there's not enough green on her outfit for it to not look wrong, I guess. I don't know, maybe it will look better if there's one less belt near it, but right now it just looks strange to me.
Only one other problem. This one is with Serene, though. It's the white part of the end of her skirt. It looks... odd. Like it's just a sheet or something. It's probably because it's so separated from the blue part, but I don't know and I don't think it looks good.
Everything else is fine.
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