Ashes To Ashes, Disgaea/Phantom Brave ficcie Options

[Swifty-chan]

Well, this is a ficcie I wrote a few months ago, and I had update it recently.

It's a fic about Ash, who had left Ivoire for an unknown reason. He stumbled into Netherworld and met the well-known trio blah blah.

I hope you PB/Dis players would give this fic a try and well... comment or criticise it. Feel free to correct me if I have any grammatical or spelling errors. You can even flame me~ XP

Anyway, here's an excerpt from each chappie (currently, there's 2):

Sulphur, an evil being that wreaked havoc on Ivoire. Its summons has destroyed dozens of places, ending countless of lives, polluting air and water as it passed. Thankfully, it was stopped by a brave soul name Walnut, who had given up his life to send the demon back to its Netherworld, and buy the Putties (cute magical forest creatures) enough time to close the connection off for good. But that was not the point.

He had broken the promise. The promise to protect her, to be with her forever…

And

“Geez, just watch quietly,” The demoness looked irritated. She winced when Laharl was struck on the stomach by the hilt of Ash’s sword, and stuffed another handful of popcorns into her mouth. “The phantom is alone. Unlike the last battle, he had no one back him up this time. If Laharl cannot beat him, then he does not deserve the Overlord title.”

Flonne looked sad. “But why can’t Laharl just release him? Wouldn’t things be easier if he did?”

Etna sighed. “Think, Flonne. Imagine you are a bratty demon Overlord. Will you release a person who barged into your castle, beat the crap out of your vassals, wiped out your entire army of demons, almost destroy your castle, and then claimed that he was innocent?”

“Yes! After all, he said he was innocent!”

“… I said imagine when you’re a bratty demon Overlord.”

Full story HERE.

[valkan]

So YOU'RE the one who wrote that story. I showed it to Rhia and she flipped.

[Swifty-chan]

0_0'...

I'm honoured. ^^'

[valkan]

OH NOES EUROPEAN SPELLING.


Honored? Why do you feel honored? Rhia's very.....much influenced by Phantom Brave.

[Rhiannon]

[valkan]

SO HOW LONG HAVE YOU BEEN WRITING, SWIFTY?

[Rhiannon]

I DEMAND AN ANSWER, VALKAN.

[valkan]

Stay on topic Rhia.....

I can't access your story, Swifty because my router hates me. SHOULD I WORRY?

[Swifty-chan]

Hmm... it took me a few days to write a chappie but I tend to drag. ^^'

And well, I did not expect anyone to notice my fic, let alone read it.

You can search for my fic via fanfiction.net, Val. It's so easy to search for my fic as Disgaea section is soooo small~

[Swiyth]

[Swifty-chan]

Print it out and read. *bashes*

[valkan]