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Suzu Fujibayashi
post Jul 31 2007, 05:04 AM
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I tend to write usually from 1,000-1,500. I'm not good at writing long things usually, since I have a pretty sproadic attention span... But I'm certainly working on making things longer, feels more... fulfilling finishing a longer chapter then a short one... XD

And yay! A consider! ^_^


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post Jul 31 2007, 03:55 PM
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Yay, I reviewed it before I even hit the topic again~

My longest chapter ever was like 13,000ish words or something. Twentysomething pages. I thought the library ladies were going to murder me at school when I tried printing it. |D And this was on KnH, so obviously it was long~. That story has 166,460 words in total. |D


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Suzu Fujibayashi
post Jul 31 2007, 04:05 PM
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Wow that's pretty long there Feral. I've never written anything that long... I think. I think I wrote a chapter on paper that would've been 40 pages long, front and back.

It's mostly all smudges now though but uh... XD;

But yay, thank you for reviewing <3 Reviews = Happy Suzu and a charged doomsday dev- Errr... You didn't hear that.

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amg lame can't even use japanese titles... <_<;

EDIT2:
On a side note the whole 'Rosary feels naked without her hat' stems from her unwillingness to equip anything that goes on her head... XD Since she just loves her hat so much :O

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post Jul 31 2007, 04:12 PM
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I would expect it's long since I've been working on it for years. XD

And shame on you Suzu, you're detracting attention from my new Aymia oneshot. D:


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post Jul 31 2007, 04:19 PM
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I'm soooooorry D:
I just like getting reviews a lot and input and stuff... XD
Oh and the next part of the Bittersweet Sweetberry thing would obviously be after Yggdra isn't like this... xD Although what will go on in it well... You just hafta wait. :p


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post Jul 31 2007, 07:19 PM
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As do we all, dear. You could read it while you're brainstorming for ideas and such.


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post Aug 2 2007, 07:41 AM
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I just reviewed. I like what I see.

Short and sharp, but I can't think of much else to say and I want to offer all the encouragement possible.


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post Aug 2 2007, 02:33 PM
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Thanks for all the reviews. This'll probably be 5 chapters I think... The 4th one would techinally be the 'end' but the 5th is a sort of 'Epilouge'... Then I can start thinking of the next part.

Oh and do that request Feral suggested to me some months ago...

And yes. I imagine if Durant WAS at the castle and walked in on that, he'd probably die of a stroke/heart attack on the spot. XD


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I feel partially disturbed after reading that. Still, Pamela is a very... eccentric little witch. She made my day which is currently in the mucky mire of a slower than mloasses internet.


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post Aug 3 2007, 04:54 PM
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*Gasps* I made someone's day!? That's like. Like... Such a new achievement for me... o_o

And ah, I remember those days oh so well... The horrible pain of waiting like 5 minutes to load even Google... *Shudder*


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post Aug 9 2007, 07:16 PM
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Man I hate double posting. Chapter 4 is up. ^_^
Wow 3k words from 10k... I wonder if I could write a 3k epilogue... Hmmm...

Anyway, you know the drill read and review please ^^ Otherwise I don't know if I'm doing anything wrong ;o


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post Sep 5 2007, 08:59 PM
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Ew, ew, EW. I hate triple posting even MORE. >_<

But I finished it. The first Bittersweet Sweetberry is done ;3 The last chapter came out to 1600 words, which makes it the second shortest I'm afraid... But I guess I'm just not one to write long chapters.

Dunno. I'll try and make the second Bittersweet Sweetberry have overall longer chapters... ^^


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post Oct 25 2009, 03:49 AM
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EEKS!! Yggdra x Rosary?! Ah, well.... Nice story! Love the part when Milanor is relieved that Nietzschie "dies" in the sack! Heh-heh! And Durant's answer to that! That right there earns a platnium medal. Great fic! (>w<) b

(I'm sorry, pairings like that hit me. HARD)

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