Group: Gods
Posts: 576
Joined: 24-December 05
From: Ground Zero
Member No.: 10
Not to rain on your parade, I know you spent a lot of time on this, but I don't think you're exactly ready for doujinshi drawing yet.
Your art is style a bit unrefined, some of the drawings are uneven (especially the buildings) and you haven't exactly grasped how to draw the human form very well either (Ledah doesn't look proportioned right, your hands need work, and your wings look ah... strange).
Just saying you need a bit more practice before you start on a project of such massive scale.
Group: Knights
Posts: 870
Joined: 17-January 06
Member No.: 45
Either that or he's trying to finish multiple pieces.
Then of course there are real life problems that could take place.
But what do I know?
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"Where the hell have you been?! Didn't you get my messages?" "Sorry, I was being raped in prison." "You shouldn't be out enjoying yourself when you've got work to do."
Sorry I was home for spring break, and had niether a computer or a scanner =P
Anyway thanks for the crits but I'm doing this largely for fun, it IS my practice, and I have 3 pages that only need inking and toning before I'll post them here.
Group: Arcs
Posts: 223
Joined: 23-December 05
Member No.: 2
QUOTE (Leyviur @ Apr 6 2006, 11:25 PM)
Not to rain on your parade, I know you spent a lot of time on this, but I don't think you're exactly ready for doujinshi drawing yet.
Your art is style a bit unrefined, some of the drawings are uneven (especially the buildings) and you haven't exactly grasped how to draw the human form very well either (Ledah doesn't look proportioned right, your hands need work, and your wings look ah... strange).
Just saying you need a bit more practice before you start on a project of such massive scale.
...sorry.
feel slightly(well, rather) the same way. but people improve, as Ash says.
my drawings aren't exactly mr. fly-high-jelly-sky good, either.