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[Feral Phoenix]

Winter
It's winter in Bronquia. There's a blizzard outside. The castle is freezing. But Nessiah isn't cold. Really, he's not. [yeah, right.] Drabble. [Fluff, GulcasaxNessiah undertones.]

A teeny tiny little drabble thing about something that occurred to me a while back concerning how cold it must get in Bronquia and how the heck Nessiah would deal with it

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as he generally has spent most of his time in more southern countries--Fantasinia and its allies or Welheim.

Unworthy
[AUish] Milanor was Yggdra's first ally, and he believed he would always be her staunchest defender. But times have changed, and so has the greatest threat to Yggdra's rule. Can Milanor adapt, or must he step down?

This oneshot is actually part of a much larger, much longer continuity that's currently known as Dum Spiro Spero (a Latin saying meaning "While I Breathe I Hope"). The overlying story is Nessiahcentric, but this oneshot focuses more on Milanor and Kylier. And, well, Nessiah handing Milanor his behind, and what that does to Milanor psychologically. I'll be cowriting DSS with Whitewash.

Resolve
Elena came to Flarewerk knowing she would have to make a decision, but it wasn't until that moment that she could finally realize just what Leon had become. Doubt comes easy. Responsibility never is. [Elenacentric, pregame, spoilers for chapter 4]

I don't write much Elena, so this was fun. Also for the Gulcasa moments, the Gulcasa's-crazy-family moments, and Nessiah. Just to warn people, there's a scene late in the oneshot that deals with an attempted sexual assault, so if you think that's too icky, don't read...

Public Degradation
[Riviera HS] Full names are designed for three things: for use by your elders when they're angry at you, humiliation, and blackmail material. And, oh, will this ever make good blackmail material. [oneshot, cracky humor]

You know, I never could believe that her name was really "Malice"... I haven't written anything Riviera in a while, so it's good to know I'm not too rusty. :D

Allure
It's hard to be responsible when you're so in love with her you can hardly see straight. Especially when you're alone with her. And when it's kind of a natural imperative. [GulcasaxYggdra. For FlameSpark. Oneshot.]

;__________________________; I AM SO SORRY IT TOOK SO LONG. SORRRYYYYYYYYY~~~~~ *wails* Jeez, I've been doing so much Gulcasa/Nessiah lately that it felt weird to do a Gulcasa/Yggdra oneshot. *eheh...* Writing Rosary and Kylier's conversation/bet just cracked me up. :D

Festival of Lights
In which Gulcasa gives Nessiah a lesson on Bronquian cultural history. [oneshot, GulcasaxNessiah undertones. Bronquian!Hanukkah fic]

I'm doing a... well, sort of a Christmas story for Yggdra Union. It's Yule there (technically the Wiccan sabbot, which is sort of kind of the same thing...), but whatever. So I decided I might as well do one for Hanukkah, too. :D There's quite a bit of speculation involved... and I must say, Hanukkah works unusually well with Bronquian history...

Precious
One by one, she touched each of their lives. One by one, they became a part of hers. One by one, they realized they would do anything to protect her.

Milanor - Check and Balance
Durant - Queen's Champion
Nietzsche - Mutual Adoption

Roswell's is also done, but I'm waiting for some more reviews on Durant and Nietzsche's chapters before I post it. (please~?) This is basically a character sketch of Yggdra through the perspectives of each member (or ally...) of the Royal Army, Gulcasa, and Nessiah. Of course, shortly after I started writing this, Sting announced through the new PSP PVs that Mistel, Fry, and Pamela will be playable... meaning that even if I go on to write Russell and everyone's when I'm done with Rosary's, I'll still be stuck and unable to post anything until I get more details about the situations under which those three join. (DAMMIT STING. ;__;)

Please to be reviewing~??

[Irysa]

Christ, that's a lot of writing. I suppose I'll pick one at random and give some feedback, and if its any good I'll pick another.

Public Degradation: I hate you for making Ledah "Ein's best friend". I also dislike the unnecessary Nessiah integration.

I suppose setting wise, there's nothing that much wrong with it, but isn't Malice older than Cierra?
And lastly, I think you're using short sentences too much, ruining the dramatic effect they're supposed to give.

Aside from that its not that bad. I might read another.

This post has been edited by Irysa: Dec 15 2007, 09:31 AM

[Feral Phoenix]

I hate you for making Ledah "Ein's best friend".

*raises eyebrows* Would you rather I make them flamingly gay and all over each other for this too? *slow smile* I can do that. Have and will continue to. >:D

I suppose setting wise, there's nothing that much wrong with it, but isn't Malice older than Cierra?

Did you ever listen to the original dramas? This is based partially on the fourth one (and partially on an AUverse I did for a gift story for Trinity Spark). There, Cierra is the teacher, and all the other characters are students--including Malice and Ledah, who appear to be around her age (though we can't know, as the Riviera characters' ages are never disclosed). The torrent for the Epilogue CD has been removed from this site, but I don't know if the direct link is down or not. If it is, I can send you the files if you'd like them. The translated scripts should still be available here.

[Irysa]

*raises eyebrows* Would you rather I make them flamingly gay and all over each other for this too? *slow smile* I can do that. Have and will continue to. >:D

Surprisingly, yes, I hate subtleness.

Did you ever listen to the original dramas? This is based partially on the fourth one (and partially on an AUverse I did for a gift story for Trinity Spark). There, Cierra is the teacher, and all the other characters are students--including Malice and Ledah, who appear to be around her age (though we can't know, as the Riviera characters' ages are never disclosed). The torrent for the Epilogue CD has been removed from this site, but I don't know if the direct link is down or not. If it is, I can send you the files if you'd like them. The translated scripts should still be available here.

Thats not an answer to the question.

[Feral Phoenix]

Thats not an answer to the question.

I DON'T KNOW JAPANESE BUT I LIKE TO PRETEND I DO!~

Riviera characters' ages are never defined. We don't know.

[Irysa]

lol, filtered

[Suzu Fujibayashi]

Yeah that filter is pretty annoying. I totally forgot it even existed until I tried to call Nietzsche by what she calls herself in japanese.

ANYWAY.
I reviewed Precious Feral :3 'Cept for I think like 1 chapter of it. BUT YOU KNOW I LIKE IT SO.

[Raijinili]

Most people are not bothered by the filter, having no reason to use the words contained within.

This post has been edited by Raijinili: Jan 9 2008, 04:40 AM

[Feral Phoenix]

..Unless Ash has started filtering actual Japanese, someone edited my post. What I wrote was in hiragana--i.e. actual Japanese.

[Yuka]

It's Japanese used without a reason.

Plus you were calling Asaph an idiot. (Lol, like that's a very serious insult.)

This post has been edited by Yuka: Jan 10 2008, 09:19 PM