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Paleskinned Ninja
post Apr 4 2006, 08:28 AM
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Ok I was told this was the place to post this, I'll be working at a faster clip from now on, it's been a tough couple of weeks.

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stay tuned, over 10 hours of work = 3 seconds of gameplay XD
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post Apr 4 2006, 10:01 PM
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Ooooh, fancy! I wish I could draw!


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post Apr 6 2006, 08:56 PM
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Nifty...Although I don't care much for the cover...No offense... Just not my style of art...

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post Apr 6 2006, 11:25 PM
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Not to rain on your parade, I know you spent a lot of time on this, but I don't think you're exactly ready for doujinshi drawing yet.

Your art is style a bit unrefined, some of the drawings are uneven (especially the buildings) and you haven't exactly grasped how to draw the human form very well either (Ledah doesn't look proportioned right, your hands need work, and your wings look ah... strange).

Just saying you need a bit more practice before you start on a project of such massive scale.
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post Apr 11 2006, 11:59 PM
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I liked it...
Although he needs more practice, it's ok.
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post Apr 15 2006, 12:44 AM
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I think he gave up, or forgot anyways... ;_;


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post Apr 15 2006, 02:08 AM
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Either that or he's trying to finish multiple pieces.

Then of course there are real life problems that could take place.

But what do I know?


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post Apr 16 2006, 08:36 PM
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Sorry I was home for spring break, and had niether a computer or a scanner =P

Anyway thanks for the crits but I'm doing this largely for fun, it IS my practice, and I have 3 pages that only need inking and toning before I'll post them here.
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post Apr 17 2006, 12:50 AM
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Yay, he's alive!


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post Apr 17 2006, 08:10 PM
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Well, I'll wait to see those before giving my opinion about it.


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post Apr 20 2006, 03:01 PM
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QUOTE (Leyviur @ Apr 6 2006, 11:25 PM)
Not to rain on your parade, I know you spent a lot of time on this, but I don't think you're exactly ready for doujinshi drawing yet.

Your art is style a bit unrefined, some of the drawings are uneven (especially the buildings) and you haven't exactly grasped how to draw the human form very well either (Ledah doesn't look proportioned right, your hands need work, and your wings look ah... strange).

Just saying you need a bit more practice before you start on a project of such massive scale.

...sorry.

feel slightly(well, rather) the same way. but people improve, as Ash says.

my drawings aren't exactly mr. fly-high-jelly-sky good, either.


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post Apr 22 2006, 04:33 PM
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Work hard.

I dunno how to use toner (I've never even seen a store that sells it) but I want to learn. :D


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Paleskinned Ninja
post Apr 26 2006, 06:56 AM
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I was going to wait until I got the third one done, but it's been far too long since I promised the 3 page upload so I'll give what I have instead

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enjoy, I'll be back with more soon enough
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post Apr 26 2006, 11:33 PM
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Kick arse feathers, yo.


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