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| sandpenguin |
  Sep 19 2007, 09:55 AM
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 3 Years passed and it all make a difference.  Group: Flunkies Posts: 397 Joined: 4-August 07 From: Bolehland, go figure. Member No.: 1630  |
Man, this is so embarrasing.....but I just try to *gasp* send my fic and hope to hear something from you guys. I'm still novice at writing long story, so I hope to hear what the veterans say. I know some people will hate me cause I duped Yggdra in this story....Oh and one more thing, do you think my fic will be rated as "M" or "T" ? Say it cause I really confuse right now..... Last but not least, I use a more easy to understand words because I want people to know what I'm writing about and also I'm still not perfect about words vocabulary.
NOOOO!!! MY FIRST FANFIC I will be out from the net for a few days cause there are terribly mannnyy homeworks and projects to be done and send this week. Oh snap, gonna go now. Bonjour!!! ~~~  Governance is frickin hard. |
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| Megaolix |
Sep 29 2007, 02:53 AM
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 Scarlet Devil Group: Arcs Posts: 470 Joined: 6-March 06 From: Quebec Member No.: 80 |
Okay... It's going to be harsh, but it's going to be the truth.
I tried, but I wasn't able to read it fully. First, you started with an OC that came out fo nowhere and who already had good relations with people on different sides... Also, I couldn't even guess when in Yggdra Union is this fic... After, during, or before... And then, why is everybody alive... Also, the text shouldn't all be in bold... I would suggest to go read some fics and theirs reviews and get an idea of what is considered good and bad. A good point, at least, is that the length is good. Frankly, this fic is bad. But I'm sure you can get better. You just need more knowledge and practice of what you're doing. ~~~ Why is life so complicated sometimes?
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sandpenguin Wholly *****!!!! Sep 19 2007, 09:55 AM
mindthinker one word, willies!!!. Sep 21 2007, 12:55 PM sandpenguin *sarcasm* Cool!! Only my classmates read m... Sep 25 2007, 12:37 PM Sauce XIV Guess you seem to think that people only read stor... Sep 25 2007, 08:24 PM sandpenguin Not really....but if you all can, please leave som... Sep 26 2007, 07:04 AM sandpenguin Oh yeah....That story doesn't relate to YU act... Oct 2 2007, 11:38 AM Sauce XIV I hate those stories where everyone is alive for n... Oct 2 2007, 08:29 PM WhiteKnight Remember, a good judge does not speak with bias, o... Oct 6 2007, 02:10 AM Sauce XIV Not when they undo what a storyline does. Oct 6 2007, 02:25 AM WhiteKnight what I like to classify this sort of thing as:Alte... Oct 6 2007, 02:35 AM Sauce XIV Most AU sucks. Try to prove otherwise. Oct 6 2007, 02:36 AM WhiteKnight I see no point in doing so. It's up to the aut... Oct 6 2007, 02:39 AM Sauce XIV I'm not talking about authors. I'm talking... Oct 6 2007, 02:41 AM WhiteKnight Challenged denied, unfortunately, good AU is impos... Oct 6 2007, 02:44 AM Sauce XIV Fair enough.
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