Fluff..., ...and the long-awaited preview of chapter 0! Options

[Feral Phoenix]

Affection - Doodle of Gulcasa and Emilia I did while waiting for my audition. Gulcasa's armor is really hard to draw and it always turns out screwy. But other than that I like this doodle. More people need to draw the two of them, they're so cute.

::THIS PART IS NOT A SUBMISSION::

Chapter 0 preview - The first page of the Chapter 0 comic, without text. I need to do a background on the first panel, also. However, the comic itself is mostly done.

I'll see what I can do about scanning it.

DAMN YOU STURM YOU BETTER POST THESE ONCE I GET THEM TO YOU.

[Marionette]

Feral: There's nothing wrong with sketchy art, but it takes away from your artwork rather than help it. It makes an image look sloppy, are the dark lines ink or pencil? Because if you're going to do sketchy art, should atleast make the lines connect somehow. Adding artificial breaks really doesn't help. :/

Something like this:
http://www.deviantart.com/deviation/42069681/

If you want to make sketchy lines, that's fine. Just you have to realize that smaller thinner lines are needed to pull off the effect.