New Year Short Stories, I think this is the third time.... Options

[valkan]

Anyways.....

Excerpt:


I watched with disinterest as Ein spent the day fraternizing with Fia. Since Fia is a gentle and quiet, she has turned out to be quite the unexciting person. As I watched them awkwardly try to start a conversation, I'm left in utter amazement how dense Ein is. That thick head may save him in battle, but when it comes to courting females, Ein's thick head only gets in the way.

When nightfall came on the first day, I listened intently to the story that she told.

"Ein? Would you like to hear a story?" Fia asked as the sun disappeared over the horizon.

"Absolutely Fia."


I thought I might take a part from another chapter since everyone has already seen the first chapter to death.


UPDATE: I have finished the story. ENJOY. Comments go here, if you want to review (Please follow the link to my story at ffnet and leave a review there please XD. Feed my ego and my stats) But if you're lazy, just go to the fiction link on the site itself. Sturm (thank you Sturm) will have it up shortly if he is up to it.

MY STORY

This post has been edited by valkan: Mar 27 2007, 03:37 AM

[valkan]

BLOCK THE BANE OF ALL WRITERS.


I'm having trouble again :P. Maybe it's my subconscious desire not to finish writing my story that's preventing me from updating it :P.


But I do have alot of it written already, and here's an excerpt:

SPOILERS!!!!

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I am disappointed. Today is the final day of the festival and I am disappointed. I can't help but feel overly under accomplished in my task of chronicling the stories, as I focused too much on the personal life of my Master Ein.


And yet...


I feel no remorse for doing so. I never returned to his bed last night after I finished the other chapter. How could I? How could I return willingly, knowing that my presence was no longer needed?


I find this all so very unfair.

Nevermind. Thanks to a friend I have inspiration to write. GO GO GO.

This post has been edited by valkan: Aug 28 2006, 05:29 PM