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Crimson Courege
post Jun 12 2006, 10:51 PM
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If I could be a Grim Angel my name would be Xemrahz my diviner would Yahzen the blade of ultimate power and I would have a familiar and it would be an evil Bunny that had devil wings and fangs it would steal souls. And to obtai these powers I would give up my identity

Name: Xemrahz
Diviner: Yah-Zhen the reincarnation of evil
Title: Xemrahz the Angel of Death
Exl Over Skill: Chaos Reign

Xemrah's Story:

Xemrahz was born with a cursed power. The ability to steal souls. In his home town of Angel City he was always rejected because of his power. Where ever he walked everyone would give him cold icy stares because they new the truth.He grew up without any parents. He lived on his own. No one would care for him. One day the people of angel city were tired of living in fear. They chased Xemrahz out of his home. Scared, alone, and without protection Xemrahz fled into a nearby cave.He found a man lying in the cave. The man taught Xemrahz how to fight and how to channel his energy into his attacks. It took 2 years for him to master all the techniques he was taught.Xemrahz then forged his own blade called The Blitz Kreig. He went back to the village that rejected him and completley destroyed it. After destroying Angel City darkness had fallen over him and the Blitz Kreig had changed into the Oni Kage (which means demon shadow in Japanese for all of you that don't know)Xemrahz haad traveled over the world and killed countless people and stole their souls so he could become stronger. One day while trying to find his next victim he stumbled upon an ancient ruin.For reason Xemrahz purposley destroyed the ruin. After doing that the ancient spirit sealed within possed him. While destroying another useless village Xemrahz thought it was to go on to something bigger than destroying useless villages.Xemrahz sought out the only people who could make him a true grim angel he went to the gods and told a bunch of lies. They believed him and he became a grim angel. No with his new strength he transformed the Oni Kage into Yah-Zhen the reincarnation of evil.Now Xemrahz's true goal is to destroy the gods and become ultimate power. One day Xemrahz was close to accomplishing his true goal, but when he was about to kill one of the gods he realized this isn't what he really wanted all he wanted was for people to acknowledge his existence. So he shook of the control the demon had over him and destroyed it. To this day Xemrahz searches for the one person that will accept him for what he truly is.

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Sabaku no Gaara
post Jun 12 2006, 11:38 PM
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My name would be Orion and i would use superion my familiar would be a kitten not a cat

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post Jun 12 2006, 11:43 PM
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I expected that much from you. I don't care about your damn Kittens Bunnies pwn all Orion is a good name but can you come up with some thing better what would you give up for your diviner


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post Jun 13 2006, 08:59 PM
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why isn't anyone posting here please post please i beg of you even though i have know emotions so in reality i cannot beg


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post Jun 14 2006, 03:15 PM
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*Sigh*

Look, I'll beg YOU to use better English.

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post Jun 14 2006, 03:33 PM
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I think I'd sacrifice my dignity. That'd be funny to see.


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post Jun 14 2006, 04:16 PM
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If I were a Grim angel, my name would be Xanthus, and my diviner would be Esperanza. I would give up my past in order to obtain it.
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post Jun 14 2006, 05:26 PM
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This is my RP:

Name: Rzul Mazegarde
Diviner: Gungnir, The Shadowy Naginata
Sacrifice: Right Wing and pure side of heart
Vauge Title: The One-Winged Angel

Backstory: Rzul was orphaned at a young age, so he developed a deep hatred for the people of Asgard, he lived by himself unti Odin himself took Rzul under his wing. He taught Rzul to use his resentment and hatred for all of Asgard in battle because he knew he would need a warrior who was heartless and merciless for the upcoming war, Ragnarok. When Rzul took the test to become a Grim Angel, he said his sacrifice would be the goodness of his heart, unfortunately, there wasn't much there to begin with, so along with his pure heart they took his right wing, leaving a deep scar in his back, thus giving him his title. All of his anger and hatred had earned him one of the strongest diviners ever forged, Gungnir, a weapon that was named after Odin's spear, but Rzul chose for it not be a spear. He wanted a weapon that he could take out multiple enimeies with, so it was forged into a naginata. He fought in Ragnarok exactly as Odin thought he would, and after Ragnarok when the gods were in slumber, he was offered the position of commanding the miltary of Grim Angels, but his hatred took over and he slaughtered thousands of angels in cold blood for no apparent reason. He was about to kill a young girl, when she placed his hand upon his face and asked him why he was doing what he was doing. He responded with, "Because no one cares about me.". The young woman whose name was Kuriko told him that she cared about him and that she had been watching him since they were in school together. Upon hearing this, Rzul was in a state of complete shock, and immediately flew away. He was flying for many hours thinking about the things the girl had told him, and when he finally returned she asked what he wanted, and he told her that he wanted to repent for his wrongdoings. Afterword, Rzul and Kuriko spent a lot of time together, and in time they grew feelings for each other and a few months after he had met her, he realized he was deeply in love with her. They were going to the isolated place of Asgard here they had first met, when the Magi appeared and executed Kuriko right before his eyes, which caused his anger to rise up once again but before he could do anything they branded him a criminal, and banished him to Riviera, proclaiming he could never return to Asgard, because of his unforgivable sin.
So Rzul drifts around the different realms of the world under Yggdrasil, slaying demons until the beginning of the next Ragnarok.

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post Jun 14 2006, 05:45 PM
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I like the name of my diviner but I would give up my apendix it's useless and Sephiroth already is the one winged angel. Sephiroth gained a deep hatred of the people who trapped his mother in a machine to suffer. That was a direct bite from Sephiroth. And Odin is a god, don't you read greek mythology

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post Jun 14 2006, 05:47 PM
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Okay that's but's it's already been done so come up with something better you completley descriped Sephiroth Rzul please be original so you won't bore me to death Sephiroth is everything you described and more so please be original I hate it when people try to copy game characters


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post Jun 14 2006, 05:53 PM
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...Odin is not from Greek mythology.


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post Jun 14 2006, 05:55 PM
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No, I didn't describe Sephiroth. True, Sephiroth is the One-Winged Angel, but he didn't hate the world, he just wanted destroy it to prepare for the resurection of Genova. He was trained in SOLDIER since he was a kid and was injected with Genova cells. And Sephiroth only killed everyone because he was in SOLDIER, that is until he went insane. And he didn't fall in love, he killed Cloud's love. And Sephiroth was not a true angel, h had wings because of his power, like Cloud in Kingdom Hearts.

My character is completely original and I'm not changing him. You just can't think anything is fine without relating it to something else.

Saying my RP isn't original is like saying all RPGs copy each other. Do you know how many RPGs use Norse mythology and the story of Ragnarok?

I can name three right now: Tales of Phantasia. Riviera, and Valkyrie Profile.

Take heed and come up with something original yourself, because Crimson, the name of your angel sounds like it came straight out of Kingdom Hearts and so does yours Gaara.

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post Jun 14 2006, 05:57 PM
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Your character is not original, your description has holes throughout, and it was about as Mary Sue as you could get.


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post Jun 14 2006, 05:58 PM
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You spelled Jenova wrong, and he wasn't trying to ressurect Jenova I know FF7 story inside out even Vincent's backstory


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post Jun 14 2006, 06:00 PM
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You ned to learn how to spell. you spell it J-E-N-O-V-A fool. If you wanna learn the truth about Sephiroth go home and play Final Fantasy 7 again you completely copied Sephiroth what is your problem


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