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Feral Phoenix
post Jan 18 2007, 01:24 PM
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The wait is the worst part. - Nessiah and my original character Celina. This one is a little spoilerish so the full descrip is under tag.

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Brotherly Love - Short comic I did about Gulcasa and Emilia. The panels read right to left.


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post Jan 18 2007, 01:41 PM
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You overestimate Gulcasa's feelings for Emilia.
And I don't understand why Nessiah is bleeding. Or crying?


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post Jan 18 2007, 02:52 PM
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She looks like she has cuts on her face. I have no idea why, but i guess it looks good.

On the other hand, the comic's first panel's dialogue box is far too small to read. xD
Otherwise, good job.


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post Jan 18 2007, 02:58 PM
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... Nessiah is not a she.


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post Jan 18 2007, 03:02 PM
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CAN'T READ EYES TOO BAD.


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post Jan 18 2007, 03:03 PM
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It has nothing to do with your eyes.


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post Jan 18 2007, 03:20 PM
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Well, I don't have YOUR eyes, so it can't be that either.


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post Jan 18 2007, 04:05 PM
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Sorry, can't read it >.<

I'll try zooming in...


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post Jan 18 2007, 06:34 PM
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Photobucket reduced the size somewhat. XD I don't have anywhere else I can put it.

Yes, Nessiah is bleeding.

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You overestimate Gulcasa's feelings for Emilia.


No, I don't. You underestimate Gulcasa's capacity for pathos. He's a kindhearted person, even if he's extremely stubborn and doesn't express his emotions clearly all the time. Remember his reaction at the beginning of BF42 after hearing what happened in BF41? (Forgive me if I've got the numbers wrong. But you know which ones I mean, right?)

The comic was fun to do. ^_^ This is shortly after Emilia got her own unit together, and the two Griffon Riders are newly hired. As such, they had no idea that Gulcasa could go from almost teary to homicidal in three panels. (Only Gulcasa. XD BTW, his quote there was borrowed from Kyoko Honda.) I'm considering doing a sequel to this for the end of the Meriata Diocese battlefield. The Riders are just ordinary girls, so they're sort of stock characters. They don't even have names.


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post Jan 18 2007, 09:44 PM
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Yes, Nessiah is bleeding.
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He wasn't physically blinded, and it seems you forgot that what we see in the game is not his true body.

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You underestimate Gulcasa's capacity for pathos. He's a kindhearted person, even if he's extremely stubborn and doesn't express his emotions clearly all the time. Remember his reaction at the beginning of BF42 after hearing what happened in BF41? (Forgive me if I've got the numbers wrong. But you know which ones I mean, right?)
Yes. He said "Sorry, Emilia, I've failed you as a brother."
That is the only form of compassion or empathy he shows EVER in the game. One line apologizing to a family member is hardly a sign of brotherly-love-bordering-on-obsession.


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post Jan 19 2007, 11:03 AM
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If he wore his heart out on his sleeves, then he wouldn't be Gulcasa anymore.


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post Feb 1 2007, 05:32 AM
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The comic WAS hard to read. But it was funny, I quote Gulcasa now:
"I will rain death upon your miserable, cursed souls!"

I had to squint to make it out though, darn photobucket shriking it.

Overall, I liked it. Make some more Yggdra Union comics hehehe =p

And the Nessiah picture was nice. Although Strum brings up a good point, I wonder what Nessiah's true body looks like.


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post Feb 1 2007, 01:13 PM
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I don't think there's any reason it would change, since after all

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In the character information it says he has to wear his old robes in order to hide his "true form"; if what he looks like now is any different from what he looked like then, why would he have to hide it?

Anyway, maybe I should just send one of the mods the actual file. The tiny writing scribbled at the side of Gulcasa's first speech bubble is "so don't get cocky...", since people seem to have trouble reading it.


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post Feb 1 2007, 01:30 PM
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Why would they bother noting he had another form if it didn't change?
And there are conflicting statements. Nessiah says
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but his character information says something different. Technically they could be saying the same thing, but it would be a stretch requiring imagination or more information to make.

And you still haven't explained why he's bleeding from the eyes.


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