I dunno, it actually seemed like a serious story, you know, with a moral and everything. But then, that whole apparition is smashed by the pun at the end. If I hadn't gotten so much into the supposed symbolism of the story, I might have liked the joke better. All in all, not too bad.
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These broken hearts are left with scars Because of your lies And all this time, it feels like I'm Chasing shadows at midnight.
--Pillar
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