 Lost Hopes, First ever completed Riviera story! w00ts! |
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| Azarethian Titan |
 Apr 7 2007, 06:34 AM
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 Lazy Group: Arcs Posts: 9 Joined: 26-December 06 From: Singapore Member No.: 428  |
Right... It's the other of my best stories. ^^
http://www.fanfiction.net/s/3389749/1/ Please give constructive reviews. :) This post has been edited by Azarethian Titan: Apr 7 2007, 06:36 AM ~~~  |
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| sinxzero |
Apr 8 2007, 10:13 AM
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The story was nice but I think the ending got a little bit... I don't know how to say it in a non-offensive way.
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Azarethian Titan Lost Hopes Apr 7 2007, 06:34 AM
Azarethian Titan Umm... whaddya mean? May 6 2007, 01:19 AM |
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