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| Angelic Chao§ |
 Jun 18 2006, 08:00 PM
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| ChefMKT |
Jun 19 2006, 09:17 AM
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whoosh  Group: Knights Posts: 606 Joined: 23-February 06 From: Australia Member No.: 73 |
Whoa whoa, hold on. Where did it say that Lina was Fia's sister? O_o; Coco hinted that they were related somehow, but she never exactly said what it was. Anyway, other than that, the idea itself was great. The fighting scenes are probably one of the hardest to write about since it happens so fast which was where you struggled a bit.
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Angelic Chao§ The Resurrection Jun 18 2006, 08:00 PM
Rzul Awesome!! You don't suck, you just nee... Jun 18 2006, 10:02 PM Dr Sturm They're not related. Jun 19 2006, 01:15 PM
Angelic Chao§ Well I say they are so :P!
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