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| Angelic Chao§ |
  Jun 15 2006, 06:36 PM
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It sucks \/
Chapters 1-3 Ascention's Eve, Day of Ascention and Eternal Glory Told you. I like cheese This post has been edited by Angelic Chao§: Jun 16 2006, 06:44 PM |
 
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| Greifer |
Jun 16 2006, 09:57 PM
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Baby Chocobo Cuteness  Group: Arcs Posts: 420 Joined: 7-April 06 From: Underground Member No.: 105 |
Interesting. I like how you did the backstory of Archangel. Anyway, you should keep writing to get better and uhm...oh yeah, use more descriptive words for your chracter's moods. Other than that, totally friggin awesome!!
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Angelic Chao§ Chapters 1-3 Jun 15 2006, 06:36 PM
valkan Arg.
Your links just don't like you, yo...
... Jun 16 2006, 03:48 AM Swifty-chan I don't think it's a proper link aaaand I ... Jun 16 2006, 04:59 AM Angelic Chao§ Fixed Jun 16 2006, 06:44 PM Angelic Chao§ seriously it was good? i also have been working on... Jun 17 2006, 10:30 PM Rzul Yeah, use big words like these: nonchalant, impetu... Jun 18 2006, 02:14 AM Rhiannon ...longer words don't mean better. Just expand... Jun 18 2006, 02:37 AM Swifty-chan And prevents you from becoming a broken record ^^.... Jun 18 2006, 03:13 AM ChefMKT Indeed, I've hit that same problem in my fanfi... Jun 18 2006, 06:38 AM
Angelic Chao§ So, you're still one of the best FanFic writer... Jun 19 2006, 04:13 PM |
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