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| Paleskinned Ninja |
 Apr 4 2006, 08:28 AM
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Ok I was told this was the place to post this, I'll be working at a faster clip from now on, it's been a tough couple of weeks.
    stay tuned, over 10 hours of work = 3 seconds of gameplay XD |
 
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| Leyviur |
Apr 6 2006, 11:25 PM
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Just Some Guy  Group: Gods Posts: 576 Joined: 24-December 05 From: Ground Zero Member No.: 10 |
Not to rain on your parade, I know you spent a lot of time on this, but I don't think you're exactly ready for doujinshi drawing yet.
Your art is style a bit unrefined, some of the drawings are uneven (especially the buildings) and you haven't exactly grasped how to draw the human form very well either (Ledah doesn't look proportioned right, your hands need work, and your wings look ah... strange). Just saying you need a bit more practice before you start on a project of such massive scale. |
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Paleskinned Ninja Riviera: The Doujinshi Apr 4 2006, 08:28 AM
regruBgniK Ooooh, fancy! I wish I could draw!
~regr... Apr 4 2006, 10:01 PM Nanashi Nifty...Although I don't care much for the cov... Apr 6 2006, 08:56 PM Shadow I liked it...
Although he needs more practice, it... Apr 11 2006, 11:59 PM regruBgniK I think he gave up, or forgot anyways... ;_;
~re... Apr 15 2006, 12:44 AM Enzd Either that or he's trying to finish multiple ... Apr 15 2006, 02:08 AM Paleskinned Ninja Sorry I was home for spring break, and had niether... Apr 16 2006, 08:36 PM regruBgniK Yay, he's alive!
~regruBgniK Apr 17 2006, 12:50 AM Megaolix Well, I'll wait to see those before giving my ... Apr 17 2006, 08:10 PM Swiyth
...sorry.
feel slightly(well, rather) the same ... Apr 20 2006, 03:01 PM Feral Phoenix Work hard.
I dunno how to use toner (I've nev... Apr 22 2006, 04:33 PM Paleskinned Ninja I was going to wait until I got the third one done... Apr 26 2006, 06:56 AM
regruBgniK Kick arse feathers, yo.
~regruBgniK Apr 26 2006, 11:33 PM |
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