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lilcases
Well it is going to take sometime to finish it. Iam half way to finishing it.
lilcases
Note:This is my first time writing a fiction story. And yes it is very random and very off topic on the Rivera story line.

Elinda’s Musician’s

You think you know the story about the famous Grim Angel; Ein and but you probably do not know that he was also musician. Ein played the Trombone; since he was a kid always played and performed for a yearly ceremony. So this is was the intro explaining the intro and what you need to know,now with the story.

Lina: Fiiaa!
Fia chose to ignore Lina because she thought Lina was just trying to get attention.
Lina: Fiiiiaaaa!!!!
With lost of patience she finally answered her.
Fia: yes?
Lina: He is awake!
Fia: He is!
Ein: where…. am…. I?
Lina: you’re at our house.
Fia: I don’t think that is what he meant. Where at a town called Elinda, and it is the time of the yearly celebration……oh…. wait I forgot to ask your name.
Ein: I’m Ein, so what is this celebration you are talking about?
Fia: It is a celebration in which we celebrate the gods; there is a big party with music, food, and prayer.
Lina: Were playing in the band, I play the flute and Fia plays the trombone.
Ein: (The trombone why does that sound familiar?)Can I see your trombone please Fia?
Fia: Sure I guess?
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Lina: Whoa that was amazing! He played perfectly!
Fia: Yeah you’re right. How did you play so perfectly? Did you take any lessons?
Ein: I’m not sure. (How come I can play the trombone but not remember anything else?)
Lina: Maybe you should play in the band with Fia and me?
Fia: I’m not sure; he could still not be feeling well.
Ein: No I’m fine, besides it should be a lot of fun.
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1...2…1...2...3…
Lina: get ready Fia!
Fia: get ready Ein!
Ein: don’t worry I’ll be fine. (Why can’t I remember a thing!?, hey wait a minute that is it!)
Lina: Psst, Fia why did Ein leave like that.
Fia: don’t know, but it is probably something important.

The End.

Again I will say it again, yes I don’t say this often but it is true I suck at writingand it is my first time to. Please don’t write any hateful comments.



Enzd
What's Elinda? Some kind of invented town?

It's kind of odd, and sort of...I don't know.

5/10
lilcases
woops must have forgotten the name of the town where Fia and Lina live. :-(
Enzd
*cough*elendia*cough*
lilcases
And like I said I'm horrible at writing.
Enzd
Just practice and you'll get better.
lilcases
ok, if you say so.
Megaolix
Well...

To be honest, I just think of it as a random idea...

But I'm sure you can get better.
lilcases
Actually it was a random idea. XD
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