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> What do you guys think of my drawings?, It has Riviera girls
DavidSchinkel
post Oct 5 2014, 01:49 AM
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http://gangstalizard950.deviantart.com/art...ummer-440244271
http://gangstalizard950.deviantart.com/art...r-1-5-440244476

Serene:
http://gangstalizard950.deviantart.com/art...ummer-440333396
http://gangstalizard950.deviantart.com/art...r-1-5-440351631

Fia:
http://gangstalizard950.deviantart.com/art...ummer-450388664
http://gangstalizard950.deviantart.com/art...mer-2-450388800

Ladie:
http://gangstalizard950.deviantart.com/art...ummer-455143550
http://gangstalizard950.deviantart.com/art...mer-2-455143810

Soala:
http://gangstalizard950.deviantart.com/art...ummer-455144189
http://gangstalizard950.deviantart.com/art...mer-2-455144397

Rebecca:
http://gangstalizard950.deviantart.com/art...ummer-455144624
http://gangstalizard950.deviantart.com/art...mer-2-455144850

Mylene & Molan:
http://gangstalizard950.deviantart.com/art...ummer-455145057
http://gangstalizard950.deviantart.com/art...mer-2-455145234

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edit: fixed
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CATGUN
post Oct 5 2014, 10:18 AM
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Hmm...did you check the link you posted..cause none of them work as it just lead to error page.
After a while,I manage to find your deviant page and some of your riviera page with mix of pokemon stuff(seriously Nintendo..more pokemon remake?)
Here;s some of your pic:
http://gangstalizard950.deviantart.com/art...mer-2-450388800
http://gangstalizard950.deviantart.com/art...C-ver-436787242
http://gangstalizard950.deviantart.com/art...ation-433112831

In my opinion the way is been drawn is good though the head and body proportion seem imbalance.Like sometime Fia head bigger than her body and Lina Head is way too small for her body.


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DavidSchinkel
post Oct 5 2014, 05:30 PM
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QUOTE(CATGUN @ Oct 5 2014, 03:18 AM) *

Hmm...did you check the link you posted..cause none of them work as it just lead to error page.
After a while,I manage to find your deviant page and some of your riviera page with mix of pokemon stuff(seriously Nintendo..more pokemon remake?)
Here;s some of your pic:
http://gangstalizard950.deviantart.com/art...mer-2-450388800
http://gangstalizard950.deviantart.com/art...C-ver-436787242
http://gangstalizard950.deviantart.com/art...ation-433112831

In my opinion the way is been drawn is good though the head and body proportion seem imbalance.Like sometime Fia head bigger than her body and Lina Head is way too small for her body.


That's why I retired from drawing with MS paint because drawing with pencil is more fluid and sharper.
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DavidSchinkel
post Oct 5 2014, 05:35 PM
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Here's a revised version:

Cierra:
http://gangstalizard950.deviantart.com/art...ummer-440244271
http://gangstalizard950.deviantart.com/art...r-1-5-440244476

Serene:
http://gangstalizard950.deviantart.com/art...ummer-440333396
http://gangstalizard950.deviantart.com/art...r-1-5-440351631

Fia:
http://gangstalizard950.deviantart.com/art...ummer-450388664
http://gangstalizard950.deviantart.com/art...mer-2-450388800

Ladie:
http://gangstalizard950.deviantart.com/art...ummer-455143550
http://gangstalizard950.deviantart.com/art...mer-2-455143810

Soala:
http://gangstalizard950.deviantart.com/art...ummer-455144189
http://gangstalizard950.deviantart.com/art...mer-2-455144397

Rebecca:
http://gangstalizard950.deviantart.com/art...ummer-455144624
http://gangstalizard950.deviantart.com/art...mer-2-455144850

Mylene + Molan:
http://gangstalizard950.deviantart.com/art...ummer-455145057
http://gangstalizard950.deviantart.com/art...mer-2-455145234

What do you think of their swimsuits?
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