The first one was horribly colored with photoshop...
http://i106.photobucket.com/albums/m262/TMSTEELWING/yggdralollipop.png
http://i46.tinypic.com/2lwkg47.jpg
I like Yggdra's pose.
Nice stuff.
I only looked at the Yggdra.
The artwork itself is pretty good, but it seems like her face should be either looking at the person looking at the picture or looking down at something. Looking to the side just seems awkward to me. Also the left hand isn't very good, but hands are hard to draw in the first place.
All in all, I'd give it a 7 or 8 out of 10
Thank you for your ratings. I'll try to get back at that deformed hand!