http://www.fanfiction.net/s/3691348/1/Sympathy
Hoo boy. You know that Feral is feeling particularly bored and random when she decides to write a story about AYMIA, of all people. Yes, Aymia. The girl we see on the Gravity Chaos card. No, I don't know either. It came from Mars, like all the random things in the world.
Anyway, this one is spoilerific (for Nessiah) and semicoherent to Clover-esque* levels. If you can correctly interpret what in the world is going on, you get a cybercookie. And if you also guess where Maduin's name came from, you get extra brownie points.
[[*Clover = famous manga by CLAMP. Very, very hard to understand. But very cool once you can get past the crappy translation and the stand-alone bits and pieces of the highly fragmented story.]]
You. Made. Me. Cry.
I cannot believe it. I have read countless books by 'professionals' and this has never happened. But that oneshot... wow. Geez. Nothing but praise here.
And I think I know what's going on.
I'm flattered~. Didn't expect something as simple as this to have an emotional impact like that on people. |D
And you've got half of it. Now you just need the story behind it (as in why, exactly, Aymia got kicked out) and you'll win that cybercookie~.
I thought that was the easy bit... anyway...